Jason was always kind of a loner, him moving to a new place was his way of trying to solidify his life. However, things change a lot more than he thought they would when he meets a pink girl in an alleyway who's more...'open' than anyone he's met.
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When you see your real name in the description.
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*Puts it in RiL*
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I actually used the name because one of my friends is named Jason, though personality wise its nothing like him.
Nice, there are some interesting questions to be asked here, like:
Is diane a total separate entity or is it just pinkie unwinding
If the former, how do they interact, like, do they remember each other's memories
Anyways
Rlly liked this concept
Godspeed
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Everything will make sense in due time, it wouldn't be interesting if everything was revealed at the start.
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1. Pretty good start.
- a.) Did not see any glaring writing errors on the first read-through.
- b.) A hearty Word Count is generally a positive sign, it shows you invested [time + effort] into your work.
2. A friendly point-out, you should also Source Link your cover-image: pinkamena, by DeviantArt(ist) Ta-Na. Doing so respects the fan-artists' works & efforts, and also gives you respectability as well. As the old saying goes, "Give respect, to gain Respect."
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Thank you, I will do just that. I usually would love to give credit to the artists of the images I use, but it isn't always easy to find it.
This is an interesting incarnation of Pinkie/Pinkamena/"Diane".
Even with pathos being "Diane's" predominant thing, she still feels enough like Pinkie where it matters, laughing and making jokes.
Bit tell-y at times, what with the main character also being the narrator, but I'm enjoying the story.
I'm actually surprised at how impatient I feel, wanting to see what happens next.
Is "Diane" just an alias Pinkie chose on the spot for this new friend? Somebody with whom she can indulge a part of herself that she can't with anybody else?
Will she have juggle these two lives at school?
Will Jacob realize what's going on when "Diane" is sporting a different hairstyle and demeanor?
Whatever actually ends up happening, I'm very eager to see where this goes.
Thanks for sharing your story here.
The comments seem good and the likes look great. You'll be put in the read later. Once there's a good few chapters then I'll read
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You can not even comprehend how worried I was no one was going to get that reference, since I made it so obscure. And you're right, the spin of Pinkie and Pinkamena has been done a lot. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely adore Pinkamena as a concept and have written multiple stories with that idea in mind. But even I can admit that the premise has been done to death, so I decided to try something different. I'm taking a lot of risk with this story and doing a lot of things I've never done, and right now, I'm trying to do it the best I can.
And also slightly hoping I get my first featured story, even if for a moment.
Damn! This is awesome! Can't wait for more
Not sure what I expected, but this was not it.
And I'm ok with that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Fair enough.
Fortunately, I know the one you used well, DeviantArt(ist) Ta-Na has done many amazing (& sexy) fan-art works (not just MLP:FiM).
I have to say I like the direction this story is going.