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Perfectly Insane


I mainly focus on my Men And Monsters series, but I write other stuff sometimes. PFP by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/278463/Buttonous Buy me a coffee? https://ko-fi.com/perfectlyinsane

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*Note: Takes place after season two, but before season three.*

The main six have very complicated lives. On top of their everyday tasks, and dealing with the problems of living in a town near The Everfree Forest, they also have the weight of the world on their shoulders. This can cause a lot of problems and stress for the main six, each one having their own ways to cope.

Now with a sequel! https://www.fimfiction.net/story/473891/fake-smiles-fluttershys-lament

Applejack has her farm and family, Fluttershy has her animals, Rainbow Dash has her clouds, Twilight has her work, and Rarity has her dresses. But Pinkie?

Pinkie chose alcohol.

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You might want to add the Narcotics tag since they talk about drinking a lot.

I'd love to see how that Pie family showdown turns out!

Ok, now I want a sequel. This was really good.

This was
pretty good.
A sequel would be kinda cool

Nice. The concept I feel is kinda overdone, but I like the way you handled it. I shall give you a like and be on my way.

I think everyone wants a sequel.

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I promised myself I wouldn’t write any sequels/prequels to any of my one shot/one chapter stories until they got featured, got a reading on YouTube, or were just popular. It’s not out of any desire to be popular or well known, though that would be nice. It’s more along the lines of I’m very insecure about my writing skills, even today I re read my stuff and find errors that have yet to be corrected, however minor they are. So I like some kind of proof that people genuinely like my stuff, so, maybe one day.

Though if I were to write a sequel to this story, which I have been thinking about how I would do. It wouldn’t take place after this, they’d both be prequels. One would be about Rainbow Dash, and the other about Fluttershy. And I was also thinking about doing one for Twilight, since she clearly has some issues. After those, I would write a chapter about the whole Pie family thing, then likely one about Rainbow’s family and about Fluttershy’s. Not about Twilights though, she doesn’t really have any issues with hers.

Though it’s unlikely I’d actually write these. If someone else would like to write these instead, I would be perfectly okay with that. As long as said person emails me about it and give proper credits in the story.

This was another sweet story, but where did you get the idea of Pinkie's family being so nasty to her when they seemed pretty nice in the episodes we've seen them?

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A few other fanfics I’ve read have taken the idea of Pinkie having an abusive family life, it’s just an idea I decided to use.

Oh... Um... I never told you that... Did Dashie tell you?

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Sorry you had to hear that...

Good- no, great read.

I would read things like this more often if I could find more well written ones like this

“Are you...are you okay?”

Rainbow asked as she took a step forward, Pinkie stopped as the glass touched her lips, as if thinking about how she should respond. Then, without out hesitating, she tipped her head back and drank it, putting the glass back on the floor.

“No.”

Very powerful. Actually no, what it is, is very honest. As a recovering alcoholic and a sufferer of depression, I can attest that the struggle never ends. This was obviously written from a position of experience and it shows. Well done.

This really works using Pinkie and Rainbow Dash.

I feel like I relate to this more than I should.

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Glad I wrote it realistically enough to where people can relate to it.

Wow, you made me see Pinkie and what she does in a new light... which I never thought I'd do. Nice work on this.. I couldn't stop reading. Upvote from me! :twilightsmile:

I gotta say you have shattered my mask and now...
I'm crying through the cracks! Great job at making this!
Really gives another perspective on Pinkie.

To quote the tragic clown of Seinfeld fame, "La commedia è finita!"

This really reminds me of my friend Sketch and I

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I wrote this based off IRL experiences and the best writing I could manage at the time, so at the very least I want this story to be realistic.

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I try to do the same with mine

Maud didn’t do anything, but she just watched, never even tried to help me.

Ouch. It's hard to imaging Maud being like that. I don't know if your intent is to subvert everything in your version of Equestria into a crapsack universe, or if Pinks is talking about stuff that happened before Maud became so protective. (Normally I think Maud is a super super cool pony.) ANyway, thanks for writing.

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