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The Sleepless Beholder

Have you ever spent sleepless hours writing a random thought you had while in the internet? Well thats my craft



Chrysalis had been in exile for some time now, and had found a quiet life in the forest, talking to herself and to wooden replicas of her subjects and enemies.
But her crazed peace was interrupted when Discord started visiting her lair, annoying her with questions and tricks that according to him, were to amuse her, but looked more like he was just mocking her.
But today is different.

Today he brings an offer to her.

From one villain to another.

My first entry for the May 2020 Pairing Contest

Featured on the 5/5/2020 yay!

Reviewed by QueenChrysalisForever: Review

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 38 )

Bwahahahah, I love this. :rainbowlaugh: Please write more. :pinkiehappy:

im just imaging a jealous fluttershy entering the mix

Must have more

Now that was a hoot. Most excellent.

Imagine her and Chrissy competing on who has the more chaotic ideas XD

I’d be amused if after freeing themselves their first instinct was to have a party, given who would be most likely called upon to plan/host.

Hahaha that would be extremely awkward.

I think after almost 10 hours of nonstop Pinkie singing everyone just wants some peace and quiet :rainbowlaugh:

I’d imagine some would desire the sweet embrace of death.

Yeah, like Twilight once she sees what's left of her castle

Can you make a sequel to this, and reform her in another.

I can assure you that there will be sequels. I will not confirm nor deny a possible reformation, but there will be more team bonding.

Can she find love in the future please

The story just started, give it some time.

dzamie #17 · May 5th · · ·

This is wonderfully written! I love their interactions, and can hardly wait to see more!

Great fic!:rainbowlaugh:

Oh I could read more of this I loved it so much, but if its the only chapter I'm still happy! :pinkiehappy:
Thoroughly enjoyed this story so thank you for writing this! :twilightsmile:

Oh, there will be more, I have more ideas for more little chaos adventures

I loved the song bit. That killed me.

Georg #22 · May 6th · · ·

Chrysalis gave a little wave. “Hi, I’m Polymer.”

Oh, please tell me you read PS238.

Sadly no, but you can point me to it and I will

I based it off one of Jhon Mulaney's bits called the Salt and Pepper Dinner. Look it up, you will love it.

I immediately got the Salt and Pepper Diner reference!
... but you forgot the token "it's not unusual"!

Jajajaja yeah, couldn't figure out how to put it so I changed it to the song simply stopping for a few moments

Nailah #27 · May 6th · · ·

I don't get the reference! NOOOOOOOOO.
This is wonderfully and delightful.
Have a favorite, upvote, and a comment good day to you.

Nailah! Pleasure to see you. I'm happy that you liked it :pinkiehappy:

For what I have seen of yourself, you deserve some free headpats.


The reference is pretty obscure, you need to have seen a specific video for it.

This was an enjoyable story! Chrysalis and Discord are an uncommon duo, but I think you did them pretty well here.

Would absolutely love seeing more involving them, if you feel up to writing it.

Glad you liked it!
Discord is the one I most have problems deciding how to act because of his personality, but pairing him with Chrissy makes it a little easier.

I'm currently writing the sequel, hope to have it by tomorrow :pinkiehappy:

Any chance of a sequel as Chrysalis play in the Crystal Empire? And of course Canterlot, we can't let Celly and Lulu get jealous of all the attention

I just released the sequel, so you can watch it right now!

Razzy #33 · May 16th · · ·

Hehe, nice!

Burn the witch!

'started to get annoyed form what' - from

It was a normal day in Ponyville.

Which of course means it's going to get really weird, suddenly and without warning like a Florida storm in summertime.

Having insurance in Ponyville must be a nightmare.

"I'm sorry for your house sir, but we don't cover house-eating parasprites in our contract."

If you get Flutterpriest to write it, it'll be a bigger hoot than Owlowicious with a megaphone.

She was perfectly fine, alone in the dark forest, talking to wooden versions of her traitorous subjects and making plans to conquer Equestria that deep down knew she no longer had the will to try them since the mean six incident, but she constantly lied to herself of the contrary.

Yup, sounds like she is perfectly fine.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

In fact, the idea with Pinkies Song was simply brilliant.
Especially since I could see something like this actually happen in Ponyville.

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