*dances the dance of Italy oh-hoh-oh* OASIS! 3 Mile Mark! This is what it means to go EVEN FURTHER BEYOND! 00:00:00
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Sombra must repair his relationship with the Crystal Empire, it's part of the reformation program started by Twilight Sparkle. First, he must board a train, how badly could that possibly go?
A prequel to Flurry Heart!
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this doesn't really work for me sombra had his own train
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if this was black it be very metal, so i like to think they just repainted sombra train
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Really? I must have forgotten. That's my bad, dang. I did honestly forget i guess in this universe he didn't, since its au. Mmm, i am unsure what to do with this now.
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well it always fun for olden people to react to technology, why i love pony stories where they react to television, planes and helicopters, and twlight nerdgasming to the internet
10358133
i be more interested into sombra reacting to heavy metal
10358144
It is, well thank you for letting me know. Though I'm not sure what I should do with this information since I use this as a bit in my other story. I wonder if I should change it, or chalk it up to being an au. *contemplative thinking*
10358152
just stick with Au it your story, so no problem
10358158
True! Thanks for your feedback, it's much appreciated. :)
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no problem, i be honest though i expected the story to go with sombra desires to become the train driver to be helpful make the train go 200% faster, he just laughing in pure joy but for the other holding on to dear life it sounds like a villainous mad man laughing
though story wise it just showing a beautiful moment in discord and sombra friendship fluttershy must be jealous
10358161
I had no idea he had those desires I feel out the loop. Though that does sound intresting.
Thank you!
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that just my interpretation to where the story was going from the title , i was completely wrong
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Ah sorry, I see.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHkKJfcBXcw
Just gonna leave this here, don't mind lil old me
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Ha! I forgot about this. XD