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After a millennium waiting for the night of her sisters return, Celestia is ready to enact her plan to save her sister of the dark magic that corrupter her.
The castle was empty to prevent collateral casualties, and Twilight had been making friends in Ponyville to later be able to wield the elements.
She now only had to wait for her sisters return, and play her part.
But things don’t go as she expected
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This was amusing. Needs an epilogue.
Makes you wonder how the thing with Sunset would play out if Twilight was still just a Unicorn.
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Okay then
nice to know the doctor called it that rainbows beams are hazardous to one's health.
When the plans of monarchs and mares go more than slightly astray.
The best-laid plans of mice and mares...
Eh if a friendship can literally be destroyed over one bad action to a 3rd party before you even met them that isn’t a criminal offense it probably wasn’t going to last.
Great plan, Walter. Just fucked up, if I understood correctly. Reliable, like a Swiss watch.
- Big Lebowski
🤣
I would like to know what happened next
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Especially the severe damage to the eyes.
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seeing the positive response, a sequel is very probable, so have hope
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If you just met someone literal hours ago, and just discovered that the person just ditched her previous friends without even remembering also a few hour ago, I don't think it would be a very stable friendship.
"Pinkie, why don't we just throw her a second, better party. I know you could do a far better job than the first one. AJ, your time here will be compensated. Rarity, you are in Canterlot, in the royal palace. I am sure you can find more contacts here for your dressmaking."
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True, but I always got the impression that the others sort of understood that Twi was enough of a hermit that she kind of needed instruction/leeway as she learned, if nothing else she wasn’t subtle in her attempts to distance herself from them for the entire pilot.
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Yeah, once you know Twilight more personally a lot of her faults are better understood, but that kind of thing would need more time than a couple hours, they barely know each other right at this moment.
So after reading this i am going to go ahead and guess that this is the timeline where Discord won and had Celestia and Luna running around in clown suits.
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It really could be, and if I continue this little story I will get to that eventually.
PS: love the profile picture.
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Well then i guess i will just have to wait and see, and thank you.
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Por favor.
"Can somepony please help me up from the floor, when I am done laughing? maybe tomorrow?"
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I don't belive that Moondancer will think like that, since she organized that party speially for Twilight. The party Pinkie would throw, could be as good as possible, but it would never be the same for her. I even think she would be offended by it. She organized the Party for Twilight. Twillight ditched her and now Twilight comes back with new friends and prepares a new party.
I don't know how you feel, but at least I would feel as I would have just been replaced.
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This is right after the other party, and she does have a good excuse. I think a surprise pinkie party the way only she can, this quickly wouldn't offend her at all. She hasn't had time to digest things yet.
sequel please ?
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One day it will come. Once I get myself a break from my curent main series.
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ok
She'll forget that in a week, I'm calling it.
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The sequel is out now. Hope you like it.
This was really funny
, even when I read the description I never expected what you wrote to happen.
Got kinda goofy at the end. I wish you had explored more celly and nightmare Moon over that cake.
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The the story is working as intended
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Oh, wait to read the sequel
And Nightmare Moon will make her eventual second return
Meh
Damn, this needs more likes! That was great
Sure want to huge Moonie/Luna for they got nothing to eat while up there.
I bet Celestia's plan but also the Tree Of Harmony's plan got shattered to bits here
Excellent hehe
Oh that was brilliant
XD