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James Pwyll


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Sandbar cares a great deal for Yona, but the thought of meeting her family has him understandably nervous. What if they didn't like him? Thankfully, that turns out to not be a problem, and instead, he has to worry about something else entirely.

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Comments ( 24 )

Good first chapter, but I see it marked 'complete'. Planning to do anything more with this? Felt reading this like it was gonna read to a short exploration of Yak culture and possibly how they deal with courtship. However it is I am certain they are best at it.

A quick giggle from Yona. "Yona look forward to it! Yona know family love Sandbar as she does." Then, realising what she'd said, she blushed again, albeit more fiercely than before. "Um...like! Family likeSandbar as she does!"

Awww Just like the other story I read the second date When they say love ahh thats adorable ☺ And it's pretty cool that yonas family is very open to Sandbar I wonder if yona going to meet the family of Sandbar I guess that's another time but this is a pretty sweet story awesome job

I respect a man who likes big women.

Yak best family

Next time Yona will meet Sandbar's family.

This was heartwarming.
Nice story! :pinkiehappy:

The first encounter with the parents is always the most awkward.

This was just... overwhelmingly adorable. Yona is her usual perfect-in-every-way self, Sandbar maintained his surfer dude aloofness, and the interaction with her parents was a treat. My only "complaint" is that it seemed in the beginning you were hinting that they weren't officially together, but were both super into each other. Then at the end we find that no, they are dating. Just a bit confusing.

Still I absolutely enjoyed this cute little story. If you ever did new chapters or made a sequel, I would totally devour that! :pinkiehappy:

awesome works please do more

My favourite species on the show strikes again. I wish there were more Yona stories. Yak Tales, Woohoo!

This was a sweet little story. Nice work.

This is written well and in-character, but the fact that it just introduces things leaves me a bit disappointed. This would be a great opener for a slightly longer story. It needn't be a long one, but this ends abruptly and left me thinking that next time we'd see some sort of conflict or reaction to Sandbar explaining his relationship with Yona. Like, I dunno, maybe some sort of trial he has to go through to prove he's Yak-worthy or something?

Anyway, it's a nice start, but it needs more.

Story too short!
Yak smash 'like button' anyway!

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Give this a second chapter and it could be epic.
As it is, it feels like a great start to something.

I’d love to see some more SandOna on this site.

Maybe I’ll make a story about them too. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

10307382 I prefer YonaBar as the ship name.

Sandbar need crush protection.
PINKIE! Where did you stash the foam and bubble wrap?

This was a great Yonbar ship story.

Yona giggled, then gave a grand gesture to the place they'd just entered. "Welcome to Yakyakistan, friend Sandbar!" She watched as Sandbar stood beside her, looking on with interest and awe at this new place. As for Yona, she smiled warmly at having returned to the place of her birth, and a long sigh escaped her. "Ah! Home sweet home!" Marching forward, Yona began their way in, with Sandbar close behind her. As they went further into the village, many other Yaks, whose size appeared to intimidate Sandbar somewhat, waved and smiled to Yona's return, which she was happy to give back. Then, after a while, the two reached the centre of the village, after which Yona started pointing out various spot around the place. "That there is great fire for festivals and holidays! That there is tavern! It have good yovidaphone songs every day! That there is home of Prince Rutherford! We no disturb unless we have too. He get cranky when awake too early."

Did you take the friend stuff from Starfire? Yaks usually say something like ‘pony’. In Sandbar’s case, it’s ‘green pony’

Make more, please!

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