Let's give this writing thing a go...
It's Yickslurbertfest in Yakyakistan, and one yak is particularly excited as Yona enjoys everything about her life in Yakyakistan. When Prince Rutherford is given a request to send a young yak to a new school in Equestria set up by Princess Twilight to learn about friendship, he sets up a series of games to find the best young yak for the school, and Yona wants to take part.
Yona tells us how it all went down.
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Woohoo! Go, Yona!
Reading things from yonas perspective is simple and charming and the fic itself is short and pretty sweet.
Though I got the feeling that Yuki and Yona got more history than the story lets on. Yuki' comment implying that the both of them are both pretty unpopular. I think A second scene with her would have been nice.
Um, GJWrites thinks Yona confused. Ponies talk in first person, yaks talks in third person. Yak no speak clear and direct. Yak must take speech courses. And so does GJWrites, apparently
Yona wrong a bit. Pony and yak use Eye for their eyes. It actually I, just letter I. And Ewe is female ram. Pony and yak uses you. Y-O-U. GJWrites use third creature for yak story.
GJ suggest Yona ask Alicorn for help to talk properly maybe?
This was a very good one-shot.
Wow Pinkie Pie really made her name here with a good reputation awesome
Oh now that's just mean now 😠
Don't worry yona you will meet the 5 greatest friends in the school and you're going to have a best time there 😊
Oh right so it looks like the best Yak is in the friendship School and she looks like she was having a little bad day having her brother and sister tricking her and everything even though it was just a playful but sometimes can be a little too far and also some of the young Yaks we're not too nice to Yona and then after losing the race they made fun of her again about her tripping felt bad for her but the younger sister and brother apologize to her the prince Rutherford told yona that she is going to the Friendship of school which she accepted and things looking bright for the young yak very nice to see how she is before coming to the school this is a pretty awesome story keep up the good work