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"Be good to yourself, because nobody else has the power to make you happy."

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After the events of the episode 'She's All Yak', Sandbar has something very important to ask Yona. Can he find the words though? And what will she say?

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Errr i stick to Sandbar X Gallus.

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It looks that way... :rainbowdetermined2:


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Each to their own. In this episode, it was well done though. :moustache:

This was adorable all the way through, but the YMCA pun alone deserves the favorite and like!

Your characterizations are super cute too! Especially Yona! Her innocence was so cute. Could hear her voice right in my head, and not just because of the use of third...third-person? Third-yak?

Nice job flirting with the cusp of a blossoming romance! I'm not even upset by the will-they-won't-they ending.

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I thought the ending was best left to the imagination. Or there could be a sequel... :ajsmug:

The ship is slowly growing on me, but I'm still not on board. That being said, I am totally loving Yona's utterly clueless innocence. :twilightsmile:

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That was a feature of her's I wanted to capture for the story. Glad you think I got it right! :twilightsmile:

That was adorable.

This was a fun read. I would totally have kept going if there was more to read...

That was adorable!

—but the worst of it was,
He had wholly forgotten his name.

He would answer to "Hi!" or to any loud cry,
Such as "Fry me!" or "Fritter my wig!"
To "What-you-may-call-um!" or "What-was-his-name!"
But especially "Thing-um-a-jig!"

While, for those who preferred a more forcible word,
He had different names from these:
His intimate friends called him "Candle-ends,"
And his enemies "Toasted-cheese."

Lewis Carrol "The Hunting of The Snark"

"E-Erm, is that what Miss Pinkie practices on sometimes?" Sandbar reacted to the request by scratching the back of his head nervously. "I-I'm not too sure if I'd be good at that. Um..."

Again Pinkie Pie should have asked yona how to play that instrument

"Yona not know if it Pony Cotillion or Pony Prance, but whatever it is, Yona going to love it!" The cheerful Yak said determinedly, now that all her previous formal training had been unceremoniously discarded. "Maybe if Yona feel ponies up to it later, Yona might teach them the Yakarena, or her own favourite dance... the YMCA!"

Aww that was a pretty cute short story and seeing the aftermath of the episode how Yona and sandbar are just talking with each other how much he really did care about her and yona felt the same way but she just doesn't know this kind of feeling yet but they're young I'm sure they will admit sooner or later but anyway this was a pretty good one keep up the good work

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