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Kegworth


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Yona the Yak has a crush on her Earth Pony compatriot Sandbar, but she is unable to confess her feelings to him. Worse still, she is terrified that Sandbar might be developing the same feelings for Ocellus, and that she might just return them. As a result, she starts having nightmares about her fears. Perhaps Princess Luna can help resolve the young Yak's problem?

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Comments ( 37 )

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Thank you. I put a lot of effort into this. I really like the Yonabar ship.

Yay, finally someone made a Yona x Sandbar ship, I've only seen Ocellus X Sandbar and Gallus X Sandbar ship.

9543754
Nobody else was making one... so I thought, "Fine, if nobody else is going to do it, then I'll do it myself."

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Ha, i was hoping for someone to make a Yona X Sandbar fanfiction in the future and finally someone did, I hope this will make people to write Yona and Sandbar fanfics in the future.

9545748
And the clairvoyant trail-blazer award goes to me.

this is a great start for an upcoming sandbar and yona ship episode: she's all yak(its already on equestria daily, so i think its not a spoiler anymore). overall, i loved it, sequel pls :)

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Sequel?! The 2nd chapter of this story isn't even 10% done yet.

Comment posted by KikoGamez deleted Apr 12th, 2019

I am also very happy to see a story about my favorite Young Six ship. I love the story and I'm definitely going to follow it. My only critique is this part-

Yona was heartbroken when it seemed that Sandbar had betrayed her and the other students to work with Chancellor Neighsay. One can only imagine the relief and elation she felt when she found out it had all been an act, that Sandbar was actually playing Neighsay for a fool, and revealing his true colors by being a hero, rescuing Yona and the others in their time of need.

Because while their hug is a major part of why I ship them, but also Yona being the only one who didn't believe Sandbar betrayed them at all is another big reason I like them together. Although I can accept the head canon that she was trying to convince herself as well as the others.

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His performance was very convincing.

9564759
Im glad I’m not the only one who thinks of this ship.

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I'm just glad that I made mine first. Of course at the time I wrote it, I had no idea that the Episode, She's All Yak would come along to make Yonabar... well... pretty much canon.

Wow... you must be pretty proud that you’re dream “young six” ship that no one else predicted became canon! 😄

What did you think about that episode anyway? I didn’t realize how cute sandbar and Yona are together.

I really love this story it is amazing:)

Comment posted by TobyMacfan54 deleted Jun 17th, 2019

This is a sweet start. Please,keep going!

This was a great chapter. Definitely worth the wait! :twilightsmile:

Good things take time, and this was good, very good. :pinkiehappy:

“Oh! Miss Pinkie Pie! Did you and the other students come to visit our daughter?” A light green male Changeling, presumably Ocellus's father asked.

“Well then... We'll show you the way to her room,” the light blue female Changeling, most likely the mother, opened the doors with her husband, leading Pinkie's group inside.

I just realized that you got their colors mixed up.

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oh crap... I'll have to fix that with another edit...
Thanks for spotting the error, I was so worried about Grammar that I neglected to notice that one.

This is a really good story. I hope you can pick it up again soon.

Comment posted by Kegworth deleted Jun 18th, 2021
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