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ArDee


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Interesting...Not that I mind, really thought it would be vinyl, breeded as in the cover

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I wanted to use the matching Trixie image for the cover, don't get me wrong. But uhh...it violates FiMFic's rules pretty unavoidably if I try to use Trixie's face, unless I do a really close crop.

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As I said, I don't mind. Though, what's the matching Trixie image, if I may ask?

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The image I'll be using as "inspiration" for each chapter will have its Derpibooru ID number written in the story description. For chapter 1, it's 1937640.

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Of course. Just to be clear, you type the number into the search bar, or where do you put it on on Derpibooru?

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you just tack the number onto the end of derpibooru.org/ in the URL bar.

(just switched cover to the Trixie image for content accuracy, even if the crop is kinda awkwardly small.)

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Thanks! always wondered how that works with the iD. And I hear ya, I have something familiar planned with a of-topic cover, hope it won't backfire

And nice collection of your cover, saw all pictures before, save for that of Trixie I asked you about.

I don't know why but Wolfs are always interesting in the mature subject, so are horses. Tere are to few stallions on woman stortires out there

Say, what got you the idea for this? Aso the story reminds me of a flash game I found recently

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I tend to come up with my most compelling ideas while showering, seemingly at random. I got the basic idea for this a couple months ago and I've been refining it ever since. I probably wouldn't have bothered writing more about it if I hadn't kept getting really interesting ideas for it...

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Okay and I hear ya. Finished just writing a clop story myself and it popped in that I could make an Anthro version of it.

And that game, sorry, just popped in too, won't bother you with it, unless you like to know.

But, given the Vinyl pic, I think this might be the first story of it's kind. I mean, a Timberwolf impragnating a mare, that's even, even if it's just the cover

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I'd be interested to know what the game is, actually, as I've not heard of it...feel free to DM me.
As to that last bit...you'll see. :raritywink:

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Sure thing! Cum inflation is also something I like, thus your story got my attention. In the story I mentioned, I combined that with a lovely idea of a friend of mine

Always nice to see some nice knot fics, doubly so for feral ones, we don’t get nearly enough of either around here. Keep up the good work

My only big wish would be that you give the knot a bit more spotlight. Give us time to really aprentis ye it expanding, before finally catching in her for the first time. The knot lodged in her adjusting her walls with every tiny shift and instinctive tug. The feeling of the still engorged knot, now partially deflated but still intimidatingly thick, being worked out of her before coming free all at once stretching her as it pops out, before the wolf almost immediately tries to shove it back in.

Sorry, rambling. Been really starved for fics like this. Keep up the good work

the artist that made 3 of those timberwolf images in the cover also made one involving princess luna and another involving sunburst...

https://e621.net/posts/1835056?q=timberwolf_%28mlp%29+-timberjack_%28mlp%29

https://e621.net/posts/1860322?q=timberwolf_%28mlp%29+-timberjack_%28mlp%29

just saying.

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I'm aware of the Luna one; I'm probably not gonna do Sunburst just because M/M isn't really my thing...

Incredibly hot! Always up for fics about girls/mares taking the knot.:duck:

how long until the next chapter? I need more timberwolf goodness!

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Keep an eye on the sidebar on the right side of my profile page! It lists my current progress on both of my chaptered stories. I've got some more to write before the next chapter will be ready but I've made some really good progress lately.

Intriguing. Let's see where you go with this.

Nice to see this updated! Great job!

Thought this one was dead for sure.

You forgot to add Starlight and Mane6 tags to your story.
And Pear Butter was a timberpony? Has she been like that from the start? If so, that would mean the current Apple family were timberponies too? Is that why the fourth image look kinda like a young Granny?

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yeah, whoops, I forgot to update the character tags when I posted the new chapter.
you're sort of on the right track for the Apple family's backstory, but I don't really want to spoil too much...things will be explained in due time.

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Yeah, for a while, so did I, but I really took time to think out a plot for this story before writing it, and that process took me a while.

Usually, I go into clop-writing with "2 or 3 characters + list of kinks" and mostly wing it from there based on whatever pops into my head. With this story, though -- I wanna try for more mystery and intrigue, and more plot-driven sexual encounters than my usual. It's exciting and engaging to write for, I'll say that much :twilightsmile:

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One of the biggest things that have improved my own writing is completing the entire outline/chapter breakdown before I even start putting words to paper on the first chapter. It really helps keep things cohesive, and focused. Plus the payoffs feel better, and you can make your big moments hit harder. Even for random throwaway things like clop it can really help keep things focused while also being easier to write as all of the 'hard' work is already done.

Helps with writer's block too.

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Yeah, that's true...I've been doing outlining a lot more lately, on more stories than just this, and I think I've got Vis-a-Viscera to thank for that -- collabing with him so often has helped me get into the habit of properly staging a story. Once you get started, the outlining process is just as fun as the actual writing! :rainbowkiss:

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You also forgot to mention this story contains transformation and transgender theme. Curiously, I didn't see this story in TF/TG group either.

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Wow, huh. I did miss that. O.O

the latter donning Vietnam War-style face camouflage and a period-correct infantry helmet from...somewhere

Bit of an immersion break. Pinkie being Pinkie is one thing, but specifying the war leads to some baggage. Especially when it's Nam.

Intriguing developments, especially the Den-Mother, but you go overboard on the italics during the sex scene. It reads like a Silver Age comic book with all of that gratuitous, borderline random, constant emphasis.

Still, looking forward to seeing where you go from here. Especially AJ's reaction when she comes too.

Mostly good story, but it really overuses italics. Italics are meant for emphasis, but when you emphasize every fifth word it kinda loses its impact

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overusing italics is an impulse that i typically do my best to reign in (it was something that I also encountered a lot in my older Pokemon fanfics) but I was fairly weak-willed in that respect here. I'm definitely going to return to policing myself more in future chapters and in other stories. :twilightsmile:

quite a surprise. You kinda reminded me of a headcanon a friend of mine made about batponies and vamponies. Plus something I wondered about them

I am only upset that we didn't get a proper Baticorn Flutterbat.

So Timberwolves and batponies. What's next slimes or tentacle plants? Also who the hell is this "Den Mother" they keep talking about will we find out who she is eventually?

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Also who the hell is this "Den Mother" they keep talking about will we find out who she is eventually?

yeah, that'll be explained next chapter, which will be a mix of the Rarity + Dash scenes along with some exposition for the overarching plot once Trixie, Flutterbat, and the rest meet up with the so-called "Mother."

I wonder how Flutteshy knew of 'the Den Mother'?

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Can't wait for what's in store for the next chapter ArDee.

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