Return to the Brood 4: Elemental Takeover

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Mix-up

Mix-up #1 · Nov 12th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter One ·

Surprised there isn't already a comment on this.

overall I am pretty happy there is another sequel to this story and I am certainly not disappointed me in the least. I love that Cadence and Sunburst are going to be competing on capturing and converting the Mane Six, and it looks like they will be Chrysalises Proxies on this, through I wonder how they will convince them that they weren't corrupted or at least get a dialogue going with them, I supposed they will have similar abilities of creating more brood drones in different manners. I wonder what Shining and the others final transformation for shining, my money is on a caterpillar like form. Still, I wonder what they do with the excess eggs there are only some many ponies they can use to feed?

TheVClaw

TheVClaw #2 · Nov 12th, 2021 · 4 · · Chapter One ·

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Well, I don't want to spoil anything for my Non-Patron readers. However, I'm willing to point out that I have over 21 thousand words written so far. And I'm not even finished yet~ ;)

Mix-up

Mix-up #3 · Nov 12th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter Two ·

When it came for pony equivalent to sign language I had a friend proposed using the telegraphed ears as a form of communications better then hooves seeing how much they can moves and is more practical sense it's near the face where you can also read the facial expression of the pony at the same time and still be able to trot at the same time. Nice to see that Sunburst and Cadance are working well together, I wonder if Chrysalis will pare them off or something just to add an extra layer of humiliations to shining divorce. I wonder what Sunburst's role will be in this process, I still see him as the bitch, so I wonder how he will deal with the mane six in this could he double team with Cadance maybe for all of them? I take it he will go after Spike seeing their shared relationship with Starlight.

Mix-up

Mix-up #4 · Nov 13th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter Three ·

Interesting buildup so far, I wonder how they will do everyone at the same time, Iwas honestly expecting isolating them and trapping them one at a time.

Dxinsider

Dxinsider #5 · Nov 13th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter Three ·

Can't wait for more. 💗

adeptusforgefather

adeptusforgefather #6 · Nov 14th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter Four ·

Any idea when this will get updated no rush I was just wondering

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #7 · Nov 14th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter Four ·

Oviposition isn't usually my thing but dayum...
Nicely written! Perfect slow burn (with six characters no less!), id fighting superego, etc.: definitely up there with Corruption of Ponyville.

Mix-up

Mix-up #8 · Nov 15th, 2021 · 5 · · Chapter Five ·

Still awesome, can't wait to see what happen next to the rest of the Mane 6 and the guards captured.

Dxinsider

Dxinsider #9 · Nov 16th, 2021 · 6 · · Chapter Six ·

Can't wait for more. 💗

Leifong

Leifong #10 · Jan 12th, 2022 · 6 · · Chapter Six ·

I love the "return to the brood" series
I read it 2times.
Can't wait for more :3

Kichi

Kichi #11 · Feb 18th, 2023 · 3 · · Chapter Six ·

Do you plan to include baby Flurry Heart in part 5? Or there will not be a part 5?

SPIKE2022

SPIKE2022 #12 · Dec 12th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter Six ·

Do the young 6 next!!! Please!!!

TheVClaw

TheVClaw #13 · Dec 12th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter Six ·

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Hmmm... I might need to give that idea some thought... ;)

Nightingale28

Nightingale28 #14 · January 22nd · 1 · · Chapter Six ·

I think some of Chrysalis’s slaves should make a stop to see Ponyville’s local magician, she did help Starlight take her hive away from her after all~

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