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dirty little secret


I tried so far... and got so hard... but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (SubscribeStar)

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The true might of Changelings.

10556781
Seems cool so far and I’m guthere all 18+ lol cuz site rules

10556787
Yeah, sure ... maybe I should put a disclaimer in there, just in case.

10556792
Better safe then sorry with the amount of people that over react to your stuff

I'm already excited just from the description and tags.

Does this means she has a crush on him now?

I wonder how that would go?

10556795
Also im loving your portrayal of the adorable bookbug

Why do i have a rediculius feeling gallus knew she was there as the pillow and put on a show lol

10556882
lol, one of these days, I should make a story where the description is longer and more exciting than the story!

10556921
I think we're about to see how it goes! :raritywink:

10556929
She's best bug. I really ought to do more with her.

Tricksey changeling, my precious! Tricksey!

Heh...now she'll never be able to look him in the eye without staring at his crotch.

10556780
The ability to get away with it.

10557028
That you should plus shes a shape shifter i mean you have a knack for kinky stuff sooo shed be a bigger gem mine of ideas then the crystal empire

10557028
Plus i still think gallus knew she was watching just couldn't care lol since he knows she cant go around telling anyone i mean A she never locked his door B he probably saw the pillow and knew it was not his C she makes a light when transforming and he could have see it

10557028
Clopficsinthecomments does that and it turns out well, so it would be interesting to see that from you, lol.

Damn. This story really caught my eye, but anthro is something I am just not into. Shame.

As soon as I saw that art, I had hoped to see a fic about it... now I just need to read the thing lol

This was a awesomely fun and interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes (no rush).

10557425
Maybe just a little anthro?

10557532
Fair warning, though ... at no point in this fic is Twilight involved, and Ocellus doesn't disguise herself as a rock and get sat upon.
It's just the best cover image I could find for this kind of thing.

10557636
Oh there's a rush. ^.^ 1 chapter a day, no exceptions!
(Really, I finished this weeks ago. My Patreon supporters have had it since then. All the chapters are already done, waiting to be posted.)

he had disguised herself as Gallus and told Vice Headstallion Sunburst that she – or he? – had lost the key to this room

Yeah, okay, that's a massive security breach right there. Imagine if a whole nation of people turned out to be shapeshifters; they could get past pretty much any facial-recognition system, and perhaps even fingerprint scanners if those are copied too. Sure, in this case it's relatively harmless, but...the Princesses already got kidnapped and replaced before (Cadence, twice). There must be some defenses against this exact thing, and those defenses should be fairly widespread too.

10558708
Lol that’s fine, the idea behind the fic is good enough for me to be interested

10559004
Yeah ... but the security system you should have is rarely the one you do have.
Even in the real world, a huge source of security breaches is just pretending (usually by phone or email) to be someone you're not and getting some absent-minded paper pusher to give you information/access you shouldn't have.

10559286
Good thing the last chapter is coming tomorrow! ^.^

10559377
Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part so far?

the only thing I have to say is

Be wary of Laughter

This just keeps getting better and better with each chapter.

10559421
I am sad there will be only 3 chapters but quantity will never replace quality.
It's the fact that not only is this voyeurism but it also focuses on the ones being spied on, giving us multiple perspectives through the action

So finale read it annnnnndddddd
It’s pretty damn great. Don’t get to see as much action with the students as if like so this was a real treat to read

Ocellus better hurry to stalk claim of him or else she will be too late

This was even better than the last chapter.

The title
It smells of a threesome
#approved

10560275
Foursome, I guess, technically? Although 3/4 ponies there think that it's a threesome.

10559523
Nope, lol ... I'm not a big fan of the hairy girls!

10559533
I'm always wary of laughter.

10559551
Well, I did say the chapters would increase in lewdness. ^.^

10559580
Yeah, they're really under-utilized.

10560106
If she's too late, she can always just disguise herself as whoever beat her to it...

10560179
I try! ^.^

Is she going to just hide or will she make a move towards the Griffin?

10560332
I don't know ... seems like it would be kind of awkward now.

10560434
Every last one of my stories ... I just don't know any other way to end a story.

This was awesome but this needs a epilogue where Starlight and Trixie do find out it was her who got them pregnant before all three of them in the future get pregnant with Sunburst baby's

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10560908
Just when I think I've gotten out, they pull me back in! :raritydespair:

10560910
But ... that's a lot of writing and not a lot of sex...

10560946
"Do you wanna go out with me? Oh yeah, and I've been spying on you while you masturbate. And also while you fuck other girls."

10561009
Just a little something with some hot, pregnant sex.
Possibly hyper pregnant, given the oviposition situation, but I'm fine either way.

10561009
Your also forgetting the huge amount of drama and trust issues but it plays into my theory he knew she was there

10560634
Same here lol though it would be hot if shes busted banging them and asked ehy you wet abd baked abd smell of cum

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