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TittySparkles


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That was quite...unexpected. I thought he would pounce on her and Apple Bloom would cry or something, rather than being so casual/calm/that he would be gentle and repay her being friendly/not harming him

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Aight, I read the story and thought it was fine, but I think you should consider mentioning in the description that Applebloom is an adult. It's not apparent just because there isn't a foalcon tag. For example: I still had to ask. :/

Good work though! I honestly prefer a straightforward romping over something overtly fetishy.

this is a good story and it sure sounds like a longer sequel.

Once upon a time, there was a little mare called Little Red Apple Bloom, and one day, she went to the forest to visit her friend. However, there is a big bad wolf in the woods, and he is very hungry (and lonely)…:derpytongue2:

Nice work. For a non-con fic, that was strangely lovely.

Una

I'd love to see a sequel to this wonderful story!

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Earth mares fuck dogs.

Is this a "white women fuck dogs" joke?

Also, it reminds me of an artwork vavacung (a Thailand pony artist) did before. Does anyone know that?

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Whoa, whoa, whoa! Please don't complain about that here!:applejackconfused: It was never confirmed in the story, so people can interpret it however they like, including you and the artist herself.:twilightsheepish:

Timberwolf-on-pony romance is a nifty idea. Unfortunately (for me; for you, it's fortunate), I found some errors:

... a blue substance that acted as the base for lots of Zecora more intricate cauldron potions, ...

*Zecora's :moustache:

She didn’t get an answer and for a few seconds, the sound of rustling had ceased altogether as she stood in place, weary to make any sudden movements.

I interpreted this as her being wary, not weary. If that is indeed your intention, an easy fix is to change "weary to make" to "wary of making" :moustache:

... now visible from between the animals back legs.

*animal's :moustache:

... until the wolf pulled it's face away.

*its :moustache:

"Ughhh, I hope this goes by quickly.

This is missing the closing quotation mark :moustache:

When dog's procreated, the interlocking ...

*dogs :moustache:

I haven't read it yet but judging from the sound of the chapter name I can guess there might be a sequel

Ehh pensé que seria un one-shot enfermo de una pony adolescente (espero) y un... timberwolf? No tengo idea, pero si era un lobo, y sorprendentemente el lobo terminó enamorándose, interesante

Well, Applebloom is ruined from having sex with Stallions forever. She's never going back. I certainly would never touch a mare if I knew she wanted to screw a canine and actually had done it.

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Hey, her body her choice. That saud, she's never going to be satisfied by a stallion because she's been imprinted by a timberwolf and if found out, no self respecting stallion will want her.

Nice read even if it was anti climax for AB...

If Doggo brings his Mate back the things she left behind, his Bitch might return her favor to him ♡

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The teeth around her neck loosened, until she no longer felt the wolf breathing against her and causing a wave of relief to wash over her body, until she felt the wolf move its hips back and press the tip of its cock against her pussy. It sat there for a moment as the wolf found its footing, until she felt it start to slide in quickly.

Vaginal.

That was an oddly wholesome ending to a rape story.

Nice work :twilightsmile:

Well, that's a neat story. I can't give it too much praise, unfortunately, for reasons of technical quality - but the concept was intriguing, the change from non-con to dub-con was welcome, and the ending was nice. Perhaps Applebloom made a new friend? That'll be hard to explain to the family, I bet.

Kind of confused why the second chapter, which occurs both textually and chronologically after the first chapter, is called a Prologue. A prologue to something else, maybe?

Anyway, thanks for writing it.

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