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ArDee


22 | Male | one sharky boi | I play a lot of racing games and make horse smut now i guess

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Oh no! You monster! :raritycry:

Congrats dude! This gets a like, no questions asked!

:raritystarry::heart:

And I ain't complaining. :pinkiehappy:

Heya there mang! I just came by to check out this story and my GOD I'm glad I did! I checked out your writing style and it was excellent! I looked at your grammar and it was amazing! I saw your plot-line and it was superb for a below 2000 word story! Everything about this is fantastic so far mang! Here's hoping more attention will come your way! Hope ya didn't mind, but I just had to make a reading of this mang!

Audio Linky Link: https://youtu.be/j9rO7FGlCdA

(I do not mean to offend anyone with this comment!)

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Ok I'm out, I'm all the way for lewd stuff but this crosses the line...:pinkiecrazy:

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Heheheheh...:pinkiecrazy:


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:heart:

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Y'see, I knew I'd heard this from somewhere when I was coming up with a title, but I'd forgotten where... :rainbowlaugh:


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Oh my gosh, dude! Thanks so much! :heart: :heart: :heart:

There should be more vapour trail stories with humans, here take this like

can't you at least give us the Derpi number, please?

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It's not anywhere on the Internet besides a Discord chat, I'm afraid. I'll talk to Amp and try to get him to post it so that I can sneak the # into the description.

Finally, this is the first clopfic of Humano x Vapor Trail that I have found.:twilightsmile:

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It's one of my favorite lines from Jon. :pinkiehappy: Glad I could jog your memory.

Yeah I stopped readIng about half way though. About as interesting as any other ”insert mare of your choice” fuckfic recently surfacing, and pretty much just as forgettable.

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Sorry to disappoint you. I'm planning the fic as a whole to have some "chill" time between sessions and at least some attempt at story and characterization, if that helps. There's only so much to go off of when it comes to minor characters but for this first chapter I might've fallen a teensy bit into the trap of "don't make characters in a clopfic hot-swappable with little impact on the scene."

I got a name idea for the second chapter if you’re looking for one, Saturday in the Park. (It’s a song by Chicago)

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Thanks for the suggestion! I've already got names picked out for most of the chapters, although I don't really have anything good for Wednesday...xP

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How about Wednesday Morning Dew by Majic Ship?

Well ok sign me up I wanna see where this goes
Have a thumbs up and I'm gona watch this for new chapters.

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Ooh, now that I could work with...thanks!

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No problem. I just looked up songs that had to do with Wednesday.

I've been enjoying the hell out of this. In addition to being some quality smut, this is very cute.

We get it! You Vape!

*rimshot*

*flees from booing audience*

Terrible attempts at puns aside this is good stuff.

The second installation of this was just absolutely amazing! Again like the first one, I had to just make another reading of it! It's just so lewdly amazing! Fantastic work just like the last one! Except longer! ;D

Audio Link: https://youtu.be/g8RG9aGaj_I

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment!)

Normally you would've taken that moan as a warning sign (nobody, not even Rarity, enjoyed tea that much)

Now I can’t stop imagining someone moaning sexually everytime they take a sip of tea :rainbowlaugh:, reminds me a a dare that said “moan louder everytime the cashier scans an item”.

I want to see more Zecora action. She needs love too.

Wow that was absolutely amazing, mind blowing, ecstasy filled chapter.
Luna will be most pleased after this orgy is over.

I LIKE. Where this is GOING. A LOT.

God, this is fucking hot. Can hardly wait for the next bit!

Haven't read story yet (will at some point), but noticed the names of the chapters are song references. Thus far, I've seen a song from the 70s, 90s, 2000s, and 2010s. I wonder if an 80s song will be making an appearance in the future.

Not going to lie @ArDee you have all my fetishes in your pocket. I want you to do more!

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Always nice to hear that my work is appreciated~! :duck: :rainbowkiss:

This stuff is fissionably hot.

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How dare someone like something you don't like!

Hard disagree with spikls, at these temperatures we're clearly in fusion territory. Appropriately, fusion is precisely what's about to happen and I can't wait.

In the amazing words of Doctor Lalves "Super Pro Spy"

"I have never been more HORNY."

Hey, potions have consequences. Nice! Love this story, keep it up! :D

It would be amazing if constant exposure to the elixir made the effects on him permanent.

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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *rapid explosions*

An interesting twist. Not necessarily a bad one, especially since this seems like it will be brief, with a chance for some delightful feels at the end!

After this, armed with some new knowledge, hopefully there will be a round two! Maybe this time he'll get through all four, hmmm?

"Unh...Cici...oh buck yesssss![/!]"

I think you accidentally put a exclamation point instead of a 'I' there.

Wow! Get well soon, Anon. You lucky SOB!

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Whoops! Thanks, fixed. Not sure how that happened.

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Thanks for the fun and encouraging comments, guys! I'm glad you're all enjoying my story. :rainbowlaugh: :twilightsmile:

I really hope this story will be completed. This story looks very interesting, so please don't give up on it!:twilightsmile:

This is a really good story so far. Can't wait for the rest. Good luck with your school work too.

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