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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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This story is a sequel to Anon-A-Miss Aftermath: Nightmares


Yesterday, the whole of Canterlot High was rocked by the Anon-A-Miss incident. Today, recovery begins for several people...

Book Two of Anon-A-Miss: Aftermath.

Cover art by BonesWolbach

Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
Not Just Any Old Trilogy
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
TimberTwi Tales

Here is a list of my stories for easy access.

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 69 )

Wonder if the CMC ever got the chance to hang with Sunset Shimmer?

Operation: Sunshine is a go!

im intrigued on where this is headed

Hi CapNTilfy I’ve finally completed my first story did you read the last chapter if so what do ya think of it

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I'm going to be honest with you. It was okay as a Slice of Life story, but then you nearly lost me with the sudden sex scene. Especially the double-dick part. That came out of nowhere, and it feels like you put it in the story just as a plot twist or something.

When writing love, it has to be slow and carefully crafted. (This is just what I've learned, I'm not speaking on anyone's behalf here.) Exceptions could be made if the couple got together prior to a story. Some readers may find it unrealistic that two people fall in love at first glance, then have sex the next day.

Now don't get me wrong. I'm a sucker for romance in general, and I can tell you put a lot of work into it, but I just wasn't feeling the love. It felt rushed and too sudden for me. Keep at it though. :twilightsmile:

10118335
Thx for the constructive criticism

PS the double dick part just popped inside my head for no reason and I never knew why

10119266
You're welcome. =)

I hope the two of them aren't driven to do something drastic. To themselves I mean.

This is an AU where the CMC weren't Anon-A-Miss?

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Wallflower and Trixie were Anon-A-Miss, but Wallflower had convinced them to join... then later confessed that she intended to use them as scapegoats.

This storyline is getting good, I look forward to seeing the rest :)

I'm not going to lie, this was really well done.

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Thank you! I wanted to try something different for this chapter.

Disaster averted... well sort of.

Interesting lay out.

I just love this shit :) Read it twice already - tho partly it was necessary to keep the obstacles fresh in memory.. It would be great if the updates were a bit more frequent (if only a little). Well, wish you luck with your work. :twilightsmile:

10160907
They normally would be, but I'm writing two other stories at the same time as this one.

Don't worry though, I never leave a story unfinished for too long! :pinkiehappy:

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Two more Anon-A-Miss stories! Sweet!

10161968
Oh, there's more than two Anon-A-Miss stories left, but when I said two other stories, I meant non-Anon-A-Miss stories. ^_^; Sorry about the misunderstanding there.

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Ah, nice! I look forward to reading them!

That should help Sunset heal... being reminded (hopefully repeatedly) that it's not just a small group of friends who have her back.

Flash Sentry hurried down the hall upon seeing Sunset. "Sunset! I just wanted to check in..." He paused upon seeing Twilight, then blushed. "...Hey."

Twilight blushed in return, smiling awkwardly. "H-Hi, Flash."

JUST KISS ALREADY!!

Surround her with positive reassurance and she'll get through the day. 👍♥️👍

>Sunset is successfully reassured by a prior stranger, thereby making her words actually matter
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If only Pinkie knew...

Oh Sunset, sweet, innocent to the ways of the world Sunset.

Pinkie knows.

Pinkie ALWAYS knows.

:pinkiecrazy:

Pinkie's the only one resilient/determined/motivated enough to learn that about Cranky Doodle :pinkiehappy:

I did NOT except that from Cranky of all characters...

"Hey... how come you got herMorse message but not mine?"

The answer to that is simple Pinkie. Scribble Dee's message was actually important, whereas your message was just you complaining.

Not all of the grave-visiting vision is in italics, don't know if that was intentional or not but just wanted to point it out.

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It wasn't. Thanks for the heads up! :twilightsmile:

Nice updates. Keep up the good work.

The first thing Sunset saw as she entered the hallway was a light yellow-gray student.

More like yellowish-white but okay.

Hang in there Sunset, you can do it. You got this.

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Her wiki page says her skin is "light yellowish gray," so I just went with it.

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Yeah I figured, nothing wrong with that.

Glad to see CHS is truly helping Sunset. Especially since she currently is having a terrible case of PTSD.

Maybe she just has wide hips and you can't tell because she's sorta standing sideways?

Oh and good chapter and use of a background character.

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I have a soft spot for Torch Song. ^_^ I just wish there was more of her from both worlds.

Someone called her that?

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Are you talking about this?

"Fatass!"

"I didn't know you had two people as an alto!"

"Just have her sit down, and the three of you'll already have a full audience!"

That's supposed to be Sunset bullying Torch Song.

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I don't know if that's an insult or a compliment.

Well well it appears the stubborn old donkey has at least some bit of a caring soul

I think even for a guy like me who is a realist I think it would be healthy to be a bit optimistic

See that's what I miss about my high school days when it comes to my friends especially one in particular whose personality is disturbingly similar to a combination of Derpy and Pinkie Pie

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Wow. Ah those illusions.

Apologies for the long, long wait between chapters! I had an idea for it, then my brain just froze... oy.

i hate it when that happens

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