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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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Everyone at Canterlot High saw what happened to Sunset Shimmer. She turned into a demon and became trapped in a rainbow vortex. But what about Sunset? What did she see on the other side?

This is a special one-shot that takes place within Not Just Any Old Continuity, but it can be read on its own.

Featured on 1/23/19!!

If after reading this story you want to read through N.J.A.O.C., you can start at Sunset Shimmer's Sick Day.

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Damn. I knew this was going to be heavy, but I didn't expect that one part of Sunset's nightmare/visions. :twilightoops: Even if I knew that this tied into the later stories, that was still a hell of a moment. Solid work.

Great job. When I was reading you story, I could feel what Sunset felt, you really done a good fic.

This is amaze balls! So good.

Not the first time I've seen the rainbow to the face from Sunset's perspective, but definitely a devastating take on it. Well done.

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: You wouldn't happen to remember what other story/ies you've read with that perspective, would you? I'd like to see someone else's take on it.

Here lies Sunset Shimmer

"She never scored".

(Sorry. Couldn't resist)

Sunset opened her eyes slowly as she found herself in what looked to be a hospital room. She felt tired. So very tired. The beeping of the monitor near her kept her attention until a nurse walked in and gasped, then ran out. Sunset blinked in confusion, then realized in shock that that was about all she could do. She began to panic until a doctor came in and stuck with a needle. Waves of calm slowly made their way through her body. She sighed, then fell back asleep.

Guess someone found her and took her to the hospital. I hope she gets better soon and help as well. :fluttershysad:

Sunset gasped as she began to feel an ache in her chest. She looked back up at the memories being replayed over and over. She began to feel their sadness. Their despair. Their rage...all of their emotions poured into her and she let out a wail of agony as her knees buckled under the weight of her misdeeds. Tears streamed down her eyes as she slowly felt a new emotion emerge: guilt.

I'm that I'm saying this but, I'm sorry sunset. You need to know the pain you have given others and how much it really hurts. 😠

an incredible, interesting and..... devastating story, the ironic thing is that it explains quite well what both Sunset and the others who received the rainbow in the face must have felt My congratulations to the author

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