Anon-a-miss: Dream your dream

Anon-a-miss has really broke down Sunset. She’s on the verge of suicide, but the only thing keeping her stable is her favorite song, dream your dream. While crying herself to sleep, she puts it on to make it go faster, and someone overhears.

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xyberblood

xyberblood #1 · Dec 22nd, 2020 · 2 · ·

im sorry but i like your authors note more than your story, it made me laugh
your story is okay but everything felt rushed after sunset wakes up so didnt feel as real as it could be especially with maud cursing

Battle154

Battle154 #2 · Dec 22nd, 2020 · 3 · ·

“Maud? What are you doing here?” Rainbow asked.
“I’m here to show you bitches that sunset couldn’t be Anon-a-miss,” Maud said, which had everyone, especially pinkie, taken aback. No one had heard maud swear before.
“What do you mean. Of course it’s Sunset,” Aj said to her face.
“Sure. Then explain this,” Maud said as she pulled out her phone and showed them the video. It was a 1 minute video of Sunset crying into her pillow and singing along to the song Dream your dream. “She didn’t know I took this until this morning. Me and her wanted you Dumb fucks to know that she couldn’t be Anon-a-miss. It wouldn’t make sense,” Maud said, with everyone now getting cold feet. “If she truly was Anon-a-miss, she wouldn’t be fucking crying into her pillow listening to one of the best songs for depression. Yeah, Sunset’s fucking depressed. Wanna know why? Cause her best friends left her thinking that she’s a monster now. A few little secrets are the things that sent you overboard? Her becoming a literal demon, yeah. I can see that, but even if she is Anon-a-miss, really? A few secrets exposed are the thing that sends you overboard. And I don’t even wanna hear anyone say that they were big secrets either. A nickname and photos of a sleepover are apparently enough to abandon your friend. Now, I don’t know you 4 that well, so who knows. Maybe that’s just how you 4 operate. But pinkie? Pinkie pie. My sister who has a party planned for literally any occasion. My sister who can cheer anyone up with just a look. My sister who would never give up on a friend. I’m disappointed in you.” Maud had gone on a rampage. Pinkie was flat now with a river of tears, Fluttershy might as well be the ocean, Rarity’s mascara was running, Rainbow was trying to be tough, and Aj was sitting down, crying into her arms.
“Maybe if you’d just listen to her, she wouldn’t bE FUCKING WORRYING AND STRESSING AND NOT BEING ABLE TO SLEEP AT NIGHT!” Maud expression had changed, and the entire school was silent. “Me and sunset will be a sugarcube corner if you wanna talk later,” Maud said before walking away. The girls were now stone. They had no idea what to say. There was only one thing to do. Meet them both.

Holly shit! I never expected to see this part of Maud Pie. You tell them girl!

Leo Luce

Leo Luce #3 · Dec 22nd, 2020 · · ·

Is this a one shot?
Anyway, a good story, though everything happens a little fast. And, why do Sunset live with Maud?

Pinkameanie

Pinkameanie #4 · Jan 4th, 2021 · 4 · ·

I liked the story, but you wrote Maud so out of character, it makes me cringe every time she speaks, I mean really, read mauds lines again outloud to yourself in her voice, and tell me it doesn't make you cringe at how shabby she's portrayed in this story

arranmore13

arranmore13 #5 · Jan 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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I think your right and she is out of character but I think it was on purpose because by having her out of character so much it showed how much this situation bothered her. It was something where her acting the way she did is part of what got through to the girls because she never acts like this.

Pete100

Pete100 #6 · May 28th, 2021 · · ·

I’ll be honest, everything maud, sunset, and twilight said would’ve went in one ear and out the other.

Pete100

Pete100 #7 · May 29th, 2021 · · ·

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Honestly, to me I felt like maud was being a hypocrite.

Pete100

Pete100 #8 · Jun 1st, 2021 · · ·

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But, what’s with the hypocrisy?

EncoreP

EncoreP #9 · Jun 13th, 2021 · · ·

The second thing she realized was the sunset. was depressed. It was so obvious to her now. Her amber skin was now a very light white. Her red and yellow hair was flat and darker. She was as depressed as you can get. Maud had to fix this, and she knew how to.

Old Gacha logic??

EncoreP