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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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This story is a sequel to Sunset Shimmer's Sick Day


Set during the events of Sunset Shimmer's Sick Day, Pinkie Pie tries to navigate her way through a busy day.

Book 2 of "Not Just Any Old Day".

Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
The Anon-A-Miss Saga
TimberTwi Tales

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Chapters (6)
Comments ( 37 )

"Ahhhh. Nothing like a whipped cream shower at the end of a crazy day. So refreshing."

Classic Pinkie c:

I fear what she'll do with more whipped cream.

Comment posted by CapNTilfy deleted Apr 8th, 2018

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Can't tell you that. It'd spoil the surprise!

Who eeez eet Wawityyyyy
I MUST KNOW

Pinkie's eyes widened. "WHAT?! Her?" She grinned. "How? When? Where? Why?"

It's Pinkie isn't it.

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I'm just as excited to reveal her identity as you are to learn it! But all in good time. =)

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I think by now Pinkie would have caught on. ;)

Okay girls, how about this order? - Sent by Pinkie Pie

I'll have a ham on rye! Waitasecond...

Catching her breath again, she grabbed an energy drink from the fridge.Just in case.she thought to herself.

No, you fool!

She downed the energy drink.

You've doomed us all!

I have to admit, if I encountered a traveling clownfish salesman that would likely disturb me quite a bit.

And so we will never know who won the tournament.

Before Pinkie could run back upstairs, the doorbell rang again. She opened the door. "Traveling clownfish salesman!" Pinkie shrieked and slammed the door, screaming as she ran upstairs. She ran into her room, entered the fetal position and hugged Gummy tightly. "C-c-c-c-curse you, r-r-r-r-r-r-ule of three!" she stammered.

The doorbell rang again, but Pinkie stayed in her room. A minute later, Maud walked in. "Pinkie, Lily's here."

"A-a-a-a-a-a-re the c-c-c-c-c-clownfish g-g-g-g-g-gone?" she said.

"Yes, Pinkie. The clownfish are gone, and Lily Pad's waiting for you downstairs."

Pinkie perked up. "Phew! Thanks Maud, you're the best!" she said and ran straight downstairs to greet Lily.

Who does that?!

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Traveling clownfish salesman? Honestly, it was just a gag character. XD

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That is legitmatly scary, they are obviously up to something if they go to door selling Clownfish, noone in their right mind will go to door selling Clownfish.

i'm gonna say Muffins won.

Wow, that whipped cream shower thing came right out of nowhere. O_o Kinky Pie!

Honest criticism: You're WAY overdoing it on the Pinkie Pie 4th wall breaking. There's a fine art to how to handle that, and too many authors go the "blunt force sledgehammer" route with it and ruin the joke.

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Yeah, this was my first time writing for her, and since it's one of the things about her that I like I kinda went overboard.

It happens way less in her next book.

This chapter was kind of painful and cringeworthy to read because of the overdose of fourth wall gags and medium awareness jokes. Seriously, there's a way to do that stuff, and this isn't it.

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Like I said, I overdid it. :twilightsheepish: I was venting a bit with the "self-imposed" line. You'll see one more break in the story, and that should be it.

Comment posted by Pr1deM0rn1ngstar deleted Jun 16th, 2019

Writing Pinkie can be a fine balance. This... did not achieve that. Still, early story. Presumably you've learned since.

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What I meant to say was "Yes, I have." It took me a while .

Championship Muffins vs. Juniper Montage

Makes sense being as who doesn't love derpy she's a klutz but she's a lovable klutz with a good heart

My guess is that Rarity's crush is Applejack, cuz (supposedly), RariJack is now a thing, thanks to "Rollercoaster of Friendship".

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