Pinkie Pie's Chaotic Saturday

TRarity's Inner Turmoil
Equestria Girls
Drama
Slice of Life
Rarity has hidden a crush she had on a girl for a few months, and it's starting to consume her thoughts. Book 3 of "Not Just Any Old Day".
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CapNTilfy · 6.2k words · 43 5 · 1.7k views

Pinkie Pie's Chaotic Saturday

This story is a sequel to Sunset Shimmer's Sick Day

Set during the events of Sunset Shimmer's Sick Day, Pinkie Pie tries to navigate her way through a busy day.

Book 2 of "Not Just Any Old Day".

Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
The Anon-A-Miss Saga
TimberTwi Tales

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Chapters (6)

The Night Before · 5th Apr 2018 · 1,059 words
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Sunsick Shimmer · 6th Apr 2018 · 1,029 words
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Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad · 7th Apr 2018 · 1,178 words
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Things Get Busy · 7th Apr 2018 · 1,002 words
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The Home Stretch · 8th Apr 2018 · 1,063 words
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The Following Morning · 9th Apr 2018 · 1,199 words
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CastASpellLiana

CastASpellLiana #1 · Apr 6th, 2018 · · · The Night Before ·

"Ahhhh. Nothing like a whipped cream shower at the end of a crazy day. So refreshing."

Classic Pinkie c:

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #2 · Apr 6th, 2018 · · · The Night Before ·

8845438
Indeed.

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Apr 6th, 2018 · 2 · · The Night Before ·

I fear what she'll do with more whipped cream.

OmniFox

OmniFox #4 · Apr 7th, 2018 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

Who crushing?

Comment posted by CapNTilfy deleted Apr 8th, 2018

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #6 · Apr 8th, 2018 · · · Things Get Busy ·

8849351
Can't tell you that. It'd spoil the surprise!

CastASpellLiana

CastASpellLiana #7 · Apr 9th, 2018 · · · The Following Morning ·

Who eeez eet Wawityyyyy
I MUST KNOW

The Crazed Werewolf

The Crazed Werewolf #8 · Apr 9th, 2018 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

Pinkie's eyes widened. "WHAT?! Her?" She grinned. "How? When? Where? Why?"

It's Pinkie isn't it.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #9 · Apr 9th, 2018 · · · The Following Morning ·

8852044
I'm just as excited to reveal her identity as you are to learn it! But all in good time. =)

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #10 · Apr 10th, 2018 · · · The Following Morning ·

8853682
I think by now Pinkie would have caught on. ;)

Snowdrifter

Snowdrifter #11 · Apr 20th, 2018 · 1 · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

Okay girls, how about this order? - Sent by Pinkie Pie

I'll have a ham on rye! Waitasecond...

Snowdrifter

Snowdrifter #12 · Apr 20th, 2018 · 1 · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

8849351
The Yaks. Everything.

Kage no Brony

Kage no Brony #13 · May 12th, 2018 · 2 · · Things Get Busy ·

Catching her breath again, she grabbed an energy drink from the fridge.Just in case.she thought to herself.

No, you fool!

She downed the energy drink.

You've doomed us all!

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #14 · May 12th, 2018 · · · Things Get Busy ·

8921383
MUHAHAHAHAHAAA!

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #15 · May 16th, 2018 · · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

I have to admit, if I encountered a traveling clownfish salesman that would likely disturb me quite a bit.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #16 · May 16th, 2018 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

8853682
My god that would be amazing.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #17 · May 16th, 2018 · · · The Home Stretch ·

And so we will never know who won the tournament.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #18 · May 16th, 2018 · · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

8928912
Good point.

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #19 · May 24th, 2018 · · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

8928912
Yeah, it would be really odd

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #20 · May 24th, 2018 · 1 · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

Before Pinkie could run back upstairs, the doorbell rang again. She opened the door. "Traveling clownfish salesman!" Pinkie shrieked and slammed the door, screaming as she ran upstairs. She ran into her room, entered the fetal position and hugged Gummy tightly. "C-c-c-c-curse you, r-r-r-r-r-r-ule of three!" she stammered.
The doorbell rang again, but Pinkie stayed in her room. A minute later, Maud walked in. "Pinkie, Lily's here."
"A-a-a-a-a-a-re the c-c-c-c-c-clownfish g-g-g-g-g-gone?" she said.
"Yes, Pinkie. The clownfish are gone, and Lily Pad's waiting for you downstairs."
Pinkie perked up. "Phew! Thanks Maud, you're the best!" she said and ran straight downstairs to greet Lily.

Who does that?!

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #21 · May 24th, 2018 · 1 · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

8876406
LOL

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #22 · May 24th, 2018 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

8853682
Sunset maybe

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #23 · May 24th, 2018 · · · The Home Stretch ·

8928924
Yep

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #24 · May 24th, 2018 · · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

8944286
Traveling clownfish salesman? Honestly, it was just a gag character. XD

HeartfireFirebrand

HeartfireFirebrand #25 · May 25th, 2018 · · · The Following Morning ·

8944639
That is legitmatly scary, they are obviously up to something if they go to door selling Clownfish, noone in their right mind will go to door selling Clownfish.

Sunset_Shimmer83

Sunset_Shimmer83 #26 · May 30th, 2018 · 1 · · The Home Stretch ·

i'm gonna say Muffins won.

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #27 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · The Night Before ·

Wow, that whipped cream shower thing came right out of nowhere. O_o Kinky Pie!

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #28 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

Honest criticism: You're WAY overdoing it on the Pinkie Pie 4th wall breaking. There's a fine art to how to handle that, and too many authors go the "blunt force sledgehammer" route with it and ruin the joke.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #29 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · · The Following Morning ·

9381356
Yeah, this was my first time writing for her, and since it's one of the things about her that I like I kinda went overboard.

It happens way less in her next book.

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #30 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · 1 · Things Get Busy ·

This chapter was kind of painful and cringeworthy to read because of the overdose of fourth wall gags and medium awareness jokes. Seriously, there's a way to do that stuff, and this isn't it.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #31 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · · Things Get Busy ·

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Like I said, I overdid it. I was venting a bit with the "self-imposed" line. You'll see one more break in the story, and that should be it.

Comment posted by Pr1deM0rn1ngstar deleted Jun 16th, 2019

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #33 · Feb 7th, 2020 · · · The Following Morning ·

Writing Pinkie can be a fine balance. This... did not achieve that. Still, early story. Presumably you've learned since.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #34 · Feb 7th, 2020 · · · The Following Morning ·

10073517
I'd like to think so.

CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #35 · Feb 8th, 2020 · · · The Following Morning ·

10073517
What I meant to say was "Yes, I have." It took me a while .

Pr1deM0rn1ngstar

Pr1deM0rn1ngstar #36 · Apr 10th, 2020 · · · The Home Stretch ·

Championship Muffins vs. Juniper Montage

Makes sense being as who doesn't love derpy she's a klutz but she's a lovable klutz with a good heart

P0NYFAN369

P0NYFAN369 #37 · Apr 29th, 2020 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

My guess is that Rarity's crush is Applejack, cuz (supposedly), RariJack is now a thing, thanks to "Rollercoaster of Friendship".

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #38 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · The Night Before ·

She got up off her bed and changed into her pajamas. She then hopped into bed and stared up at the ceiling. Taped to the ceiling was the Best Friends picture from their school yearbook. She had put it there so that she and her friends would be the last thing she'd see before falling asleep, and the first thing she'd see when she woke up. She smiled fondly at the picture.

My sister did a similar thing in her room, but it's of a poster starring one of her fav actors/singers.

Then there's Rainbow Dash, or as I like to call her, Dashie. Who knew that nickname would be used by all of us? She sticks by your side like that glue I made in science class. She's very competitive, especially with AJ.

I think your the only one who uses that nickname Pinkie.

She turned the light on and took all of her clothes off, shaking all of the canisters. Grinning with anticipation, she took a canister in each hand and sprayed all the whipped cream out of them. She repeated the process with the other 10 canisters. Completely covered in whipped cream, she sighed contentedly. "Much better."

https://m.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #39 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · Sunsick Shimmer ·

Is she drinking CrocoJuice? That's a good drink for people with sick stomachs. - Sent by Twilight Sparkle

Is that a real thing or made up?

Pinkie thought for a moment. "No. I guess they haven't been introduced to Equestria Girls canon yet."

Here we go again.

I don't think Lily Pad's going to be here for another hour or so... It's too nice to stay indoors. Maybe I can talk Lily into reading outside. The sun is shining, the birds are chirping, people are walking their dogs. Pinkie sighed. I love summer. Pinkie let out a frustrated groan. "BORED!" Why is the title of this story "Pinkie Pie's Chaotic Saturday"? Nothing's happening right now! Well, that's not true. I'm playing a video game. That's a thing that's happening. The doorbell rang.

Stop breaking the fourth wall Pinkie!

"A-a-a-a-a-a-re the c-c-c-c-c-clownfish g-g-g-g-g-gone?" she said.

What's so bad about clownfish?

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #40 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · Lily Pad at Pinkie's Pad ·

"'And they all lived happily ever after. The end.'" said Lily as she finished reading the story aloud. She turned to look at Pinkie, who was fast asleep and snoring next to her. Lily smiled, then gently nudged Pinkie awake.

And she said she wouldn't fall asleep.

Pinkie bolted out from under the couch and laughed nervously. "Sorry about that. Clownfish scare the pudding out of me." she blushed. "Hiya, Rarity!" she said, before she realized what Rarity was wearing. Within an instant, Pinkie was on the floor, doubled over with laughter. "Rarity..." she managed to say while still laughing, her face bright red. "What...ahahahaha....are you...heeheeheehee..."

Ok? I don't see why you'd be afraid of them Pinkie.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #41 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · Things Get Busy ·

Suddenly, realization dawned on her. "Oh, confection used as a euphemism for expletives!" she facepalmed. "I have that party I planned for an inconsequential character!" Running as fast as she could, she ran back home and stuffed all the necessary supplies in her hair. Exiting her house, she heard the sound of a dog barking getting closer. "Ack!" Pinkie yelped. "A chase scene? Look, I get the author's trying to reach his self-imposed quota of one thousand words per chapter, but is a chase scene really necessary?" Pinkie said, rolling her eyes.

A space is needed after the first paragraph.
And Pinkie, you got to stop doing that.

She made a mad dash to her house. I totally forgot to feed Boulder! I never forget to feed Boulder!

He can't eat anything he's a rock.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #42 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · The Home Stretch ·

Pinkie rarely swore, but in this case she believed the situation warranted it. "Dammit." she muttered under her breath as her hand slapped her forehead in exasperation. Sighing, she stood up and made her way to her next destination. Next up: the jump-rope competition. , she thought in anticipation.

competition,*

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #43 · Nov 28th, 2022 · · · The Following Morning ·

Rainbow frowned. "Yeah, it sucks. But hey, we had a good run." Seeing a familiar figure walk up behind Pinkie, she followed up with "Didn't we, Twilight?"

You girls sure did.