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A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)
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Alright, I'm hyped. Putting on the tracking radar.
With the stress level of this school, I'm surprised they don't have numbers for you to take.
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Heh. Good point.
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She's not a major character in this story.
I have a feeling most of the parents of children in Crystal Prep aren't as loving and understanding as Lemon Zest's.
Ah shit. Lemon's going to need a tranquilizer gun to handle Sour Sweet's mental issues.
I only have one thing to say about the roast of Sour Sweet by Lemon Zest.
Also, she probably won't beat Sour Bitch, but at least she can say she was able to get her to crack AND she roasted her in the best way possible in front of everybody.
This is getting really good. Keep going!
Wow. Lemon Zest actually held her own against Sour Bitch. Impressive.
Hopefully, things go well with Twilight.
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I felt that a curbstomp battle that went either way would be unsatisfying. I had to make it interesting. =)
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Either way, great job! Even if nobody won, a statement was made!
At least she has 1 friend now.
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It’s not going to last long, though.
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Really? Tsk, that sucks.
Spike has that calming effect on the ladies.
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Remember, this is before the events of the friendship games, if what the author said was true.
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It is indeed true, but I closely looked through the Friendship Games transcript just to be certain about the direction I'm taking. I ain't spoiling nothin' though. =P
When you hear the sound of breaking glass...
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I was thinking more along the lines of:
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THANK YOU! That was the exact thing I was looking for.
A sick part of me wanted both Sour Sweet and Lemon Zest to punch Principal Cinch and yell "You stay outta this!" Oh well. They're not finished with each other yet.
Tick tock. Tick tock. Tick tock.
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Dude YES!!!!
Nice filler chapter.
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I don't think I'd entirely call it filler, but I will admit I've been struggling. I'm still new to the whole writing scene.
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Well you're doing good so far, though I'm forced to assume that Lemon's team lost that video game.
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It’s fine. Keep going, that way you’ll improve.
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Well it was against the Main Six. =P
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That's the plan! Thanks for the words of encouragement! ^_^
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Anytime!
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Yeah, I figured that much. Although I would have expected Twilight to be a bit of a better strategist, at least be able to get them close.
I think I know who all those players were save one. I wonder who Gr8npwrfl is? I am surprised Lemon didn't have another run-in with Sour. In any case, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Gr8npwrful. Gr-eight n pwrful. Ring a bell? =3
OMG I TOTALLY FORGOT WHO RADIANT HOPE WAS!!! I only skimmed through that comic, haha. What a great idea to have her as a guidance counselor!
I actually really support the possible friendship between Lemon Zest and Twilight!
Of course, figures they’d fight again. And she once again owned Sour Bitch.
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Actually, I prefer to think they tied the first time. I just figured out a way to make the curbstomp battle interesting.
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Either way, great job and great job Lemon for kicking Sour’s ass.
Hey at least things looked up this time.
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I knew it wasn't over. Probably still isn't.
Six more days. Well, about five and a half now.
Eh at least this chapter was more peaceful for Lemon.
First of all-- awesome chapter, as always! Second-- OMG YES POUR SOME SUGAR ON ME IS SUCH A FLIPPING GREAT SONG
Monday is going to be interesting. At least she has one more day before she has to go back... there.
Decent filler.
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Thanks. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter. =)
And now Lemon is paranoid about Sour.
Nice chapter.
Patience, Lemon. Patience.
Murphy: Don't. Invite me.
Murphy: My job can be such a pain sometimes.
I was half expecting Sour to walk out of Radiant's office.