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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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@CapNTilfy

Just a friendly point-out for your cover-image source, it is: 'hard work', by DeviantArt(ist) Ta-Na.

Ta-Na does excellent quality fan-artworks (not just MLP:FiM), so you should Source-link and credit him properly for his work(s). :ajsmug:

Other than Applejack picking up someone bigger than her being a load of crap, this was a nice story. Loved the detail. :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks! I mean, she's super-strong.

9977981
Fair enough, will do.

*whistles* This was a good read. I approve of it! :ajsmug:

9978010
Well EqG AJ does have super strength

Talk about a hot romance. Wow!

"It's okay, baby. I'm here," you said reassuringly.

I liked this line, its so sweet! And something you shoukd definitly say to your girlfriend or wife!

This was a beautifully sweet heartwarming chapter I love getting to see there whole relationship it was adorable.

🎶Roll, roll, roll in ze hay! 🎶

Sorry, couldn't resist. :pinkiecrazy:

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I didn't get the reference, but I laughed anyway. XD

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Really should watch the movie. One of the greatest comedies of all time.

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Oh, Young Frankenstein! I haven't seen that movie in ages. I didn't remember that scene. ^_^; I remember

Putting on the Ritz scene
Igor singing "I Ain't Got No(body)"
and that one woman's name that always caused thunder to strike and horses to whinny.

One lucky dude. As the reader, I'm merely portraying him. I'm not really that charismatic or likely to achieve such a beautiful relationship.

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Oh, I'm sure you'll find the right person someday! At least, that's what I've been told most of my life

Why'd you skip Rainbow Dash?

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I didn't skip her, I simply haven't written her story yet.

Applejack's hand wandered down to your pants, and you felt your belt loosen.

But, dawg, the pants are already off.

Fix this please, it really ruined my immersion.

Good story!
Me like!

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Thanks for the catch, fixed it!

nice work:twilightsmile:

Ah Applejack. One of my favorites. I have a feeling I'm gonna enjoy reading the rest of this series. :raritywink:

That was not that bad! Good job! :ajsmug:

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