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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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So Crystal Clarity is Sugercoat's mom. How the fuck about that?

Sugarcoat opened the door, then walked in. "Hey, mom." She said.

Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

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There will, but I can't tell you when. :raritywink:

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So.......Sugarcoat is a slut? And her dad doesn’t mind?


Incredible!!!!

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Well, I'd imagine it would be disappointing if she was a virgin after everything she's said in all the other stories! :pinkiehappy:

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In the end, great job!!!!

I find it weird that this one has the M tag, compared to the others it just feels kinda out of place. But a bit of lewdness never hurts.

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I will admit it does seem out of place like you said, but I don't want to confine myself to just the Slice of Life genre. I want to branch out and experiment. I don't plan on doing any Mystery or Thriller stories whatsoever, because I don't think I'd be good at those. All the other genres are possible, though.

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:rainbowlaugh: Oh my god!!


I think Sugarcoat might be the most normal one of the 5. And that's not saying much at all!

Its nice to have a story like this be told from a females point of view for a change, not many can pull it off and make it work and its really rare.
I like where this is going, gonna stick around to see more.

"I do. But try to keep your sexual escapades out of Crystal Prep."

That went in one ear and out of the other.:facehoof:
I forget if this guidance counselor is part of 'The Cause.'

If she was with a sterile.....

Gotta say at first i was skeptical about Sugarcoat being the "Horny girl" I just cant picture her being like this. She's more of a calm and collected type of person from what we've seen so far in the specials.
But hey, that doesnt mean its not enjoyable seeing her be in all these wild situations.

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To be fair, there hasn't been a lot of character development for Sugarcoat. All that's really known about her is what you just said, so I like to think there's room for this as a possibility. Besides, it wouldn't be all that surprising if there's a bunch of fics here about the calm and collected ones being sluts. You know the saying: "It's always the ones you least suspect."

Why do I feel as though it won't be Neon at the door

I skipped the clop chapter. Sorry. As for this chapter...

Sizzle sighed as he put the palm of his hand to his forehead. "It's not going to be like last time, is it?"

Sugarcoat shuddered from the memory. "Don't remind me about last time. I still can't believe he tried to talk you and mom into joining us upstairs. I've avoided that guy like the plague since then."

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No worries. =) I knew some people would want to skip them, that's why I noted which chapters they're on. Also, love the reference. XD

I guess she's found the one she was looking for.

That last part didnt really feel like a proper apology and he forgave her way too fast, it was more like: "okay lets get going we have stuff to do"
But eh, whatever. I can roll with that.

I'm not sure how to take how things are progressing.

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Good filler chapter.

No shower after a night of sex? Ewww.

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Why did that make me laugh? :rainbowlaugh:

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Actually, they didn't shower. They just put on their uniforms and went to school.

Oof, that was one rough ride alright.

Who's Sapphire Joy?:rainbowhuh:

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I put a link to her MLP wiki entry in the Author's note. Just an inconsequential character.

This fic reminds me of zoe the vampire in all the bad ways. Weird family dynamic, check. Constant use of vagina, vagina juice, just "juice" in general, check. And while not the worst thing I've ever read or gotten off to, it's definitely not a good one. I'll be ending the ride here as the cringe became to much for me and became unenjoyable.

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Eh, fair enough. Sorry you didn't enjoy it. Have a good one! =)

So, they both had bad relationship before. This talk may be very enlightening for them both.

If a dragon and a gridding have sex all the time and didn't care then this would be tamed.

Sweet. Nice chapter. But what's 'YA'?

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A gridding? Are you sure you don't mean a griffin?

Comment posted by CapNTilfy deleted Aug 20th, 2018

Rephrase question: Those two make Ponyville's resident dragon and an excitable CMC griffin who doesn't care of what they doing in their love-making looks shamelessly tamed on vacation.

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Poor Sugarcoat....and poor Neon.....


Good luck to the two of ya.

The saddest part of it all is that I used to be in a similar situation to Neon Lights. I used to date an emotionally manipulative girl in high school but none of what she did registered with me until very late into our relationship. Thankfully, I was able to end things with her, but I will never forget what that felt like or what that experience has taught me.

They could go to an equipment room to 'cool off'.

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Perhaps, but wouldn't that still be within campus grounds?

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