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CapNTilfy


A lovable goofball who delights in spreading positive vibes and writing stories. =3 (AKA Orangie1984 of Derpibooru!)

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Not bad, but rather rushed at the end. And I kind of want to see what happens when Sour's allowed to go untranquilized... preferably from the safety of another universe.

I haven’t caught up on the latest beanis stories yet, so can’t say I was a fan of the spoiler in the description.

oh i'm kinda jealous. i'd totally love to hook up with the shadowbolt 5

I got it! Sunset is the reason why this dark timeline started: By quitting Beanis Inc., she caused Midnight Sparkle to take power.

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Sorry about that! ^_^ Changed it.

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If I manage to get another entry in, I'll do better. =)

Eh, this was kind of a nothing burger.

Sugarcoat pinched the bridge of her nose as she arrived at the booth. "Dammit, Rainbow. Sometimes I think fucking a cheese grater would be less painful than listening to your stupidity."

This sums up the Beanis-verse perfectly. I love it!

"Yes. For the women's bathroom. Apparently when you passed out, someone by the name of...'Concentrated Awesome' had sex with five other girls in there. By the way, you're banned from this restaurant."

...Now this is complete bullcrap and I think Scitwi has a case against the restaurant now. She had nothing to do with what Rainbow Dash pulled and was completely against Rainbow doing anything related to "Concentrated Awesome" so if anything, it's Rainbow Dash and the Shadowbolts who should be banned, not the one person who wasn't involved. I'm interested in seeing a court case play out over that now, and possibly Rainbow having to deal with maybe legal trouble for the stunt she pulled in a public restaurant bathroom. Because I highly doubt that wouldn't raise a few eyebrows and get the police involved at the very least.

On another note, wonder how Sunset will react when she hears about this eventually?

Twilight's eyes widened. " GODDAMMIT, RAINBOW DASH! "

The Meta, THE METAAAAAAA!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

That's the problem with fics that clock at around one thousand words: just not enough substance, really. It barely starts and it's already over. With the most interesting part happening offscreen.

I really want to know what Sugarcoat would have to say about Rainbow Dash's Penis. Bet it was hilarious.

I read this when it came out but I missed dropping a comment. The pacing here is a rocket sled. But there are a bunch of good jokes and little asides. I liked this story back then and I still like it now.

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Thanks! I've come a long way since then, thanks to the help of you and the other BCU writers! =)

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