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Echo Breeze


Author | Pony EDM producer | DJ | Remixer | fluffy trans pegabat mare

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This story is a sequel to Cadere a Gratia (Fall from Grace)


Sunset has begun her recovery, gotten the girl of her dreams, even become a princess. Though not all of her wounds are superficial, and cannot be healed with apologies. What happens when she encounters some of the students from CHS a week before school is due to start. Will she choose to stay in Equestria, or remain on Earth with her girlfriend, Rainbow Dash.

Cover art once again by the amazing BiggerNate91

Featured November 28th 2022 to November 29th 2022


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Chapters (11)
Comments ( 120 )

10321020
Thanks, and thank you for the watch.

Not usually a fan of Alicorn/Princess Sunset stories, but I'll stick with it for now and see where it goes.

10321272
All I ask. Thanks for reading. Will have the next chapter up soon.

Can't wait to see what happens next

Well, it's 65+5 in some cases. Plus lucky them the highway wasn't a choke full of traffic, unlucky for them the patrol car caught them speeding.

Just saying, Gilda being the one to give Sunset crap and try to teach her a lesson has been REALLY overused in Anon-a-Miss fics.

10324092
I agree, but she is the easiest one to write about being vengeful. I don't mean to sound lazy, but my story only partly rides on that. You'll just have to wait and see. Chapter 3 is with my editors now, so it should be up soon.

10323321
Yeah. I'm from South Africa, so I'm a little confused about some of the laws. Did you see what I did there though?:derpyderp1::pinkiehappy:

10324234
Most speed limits have a 5 MPH cushion to take into account other factors though if it's quota time ...

Great chapter as always

10325093
Thanks. And thanks for reading.:twilightsmile:

10325023
To be fair on the patrol officer, Sunset was doing 110 on the highway.

“Yip.” I said, turning to address the entire room. “I think we should head to the throne room. I’ll explain everything when we get there.” There was a chorus of agreement as we all turned to walk off, Dash and Snowflake getting into a race to see who could get there the fastest.

AMAZING chapter, as always, but had a question, djd you really mean to type "yip"?

Typical Rainbow Dash moment there at the end. Rainbow just has to prove that she's faster than everyone else, even herself.

10325443
Yip. Despite Snowflake (Human Dash) not knowing where the throne room was.

Liked what you did with giving human rainbow dash a different cutie mark and different hair to make sure she's different from her counterpart.

10326750
Easier to write that way. Do you like her nickname?

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10327191
Thanks guys. It's praise like this that keeps me going.

“Besides, Snowflake and I need to get some flying practice in, and I can’t think of a better teacher than Equestria’s Best Flyer.”

Wonder if either will ask Twilight on how many crashes she had learning ...

10328173
Possibly. Might happen in the next chapter, might not.:pinkiehappy:

A great, funny, and cute chapter.

Still feel weird that Sunset is a alicorn

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10329969
Thanks guys. Next one will be here a little later. Got a lot to get through today before I can update.
10329952
I'm not the first one to do it. I've been wanting to do an Alicorn Sunset story for a while now.

10330020

I'm not the first one to do it. I've been wanting to do an Alicorn Sunset story for a while now.

There are far too few such stories.

10336058
Yeah. A pity it's not Canon though.

Great chapter and it's fine it was late. Your going through a lot

What? No, don't put her through that again!

10339795

Just wait. there is a method to my madness.:pinkiecrazy:

10361482
Coming in the next chapter. I have a major plan for that.

10361663
Well, I say major, when it isn't really.

10370928
Thanks. I'm glad to have readers like you. No matter how dissappointed I am with the final outcome of a chapter, you always compliment them. :twilightsmile:

10370949
I edited the A/N. Take a look, mate.:twilightsmile:

10370964
Hey, no prob. It's the least I can do after all the positivity you sent my way, especially during my depression. It was one of the things that kept me going through the recovery process.

Enjoyed the news chapter

Hey, it's me again, back with some more new cover art.

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