This story is a sequel to Anon-A-Miss: Anguish
The Crusaders: Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. Trixie Lulamoon. Wallflower Blush. Sunset Shimmer.
These six girls were at the epicenter of the Anon-A-Miss incident. With the day behind them, they'll discover that their troubles have only just begun...
Book One of Anon-A-Miss: Aftermath.
Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
Not Just Any Old Trilogy
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
TimberTwi Tales
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And so it begins.
Can't say it isn't deserved though.
Short and sweet.
Well, that one certainly took a turn. I mean, yeah they all did, true. Good on you for not simply having them all have essentially the same nightmare.
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I try not to rehash concepts if I feel I can avoid it.
Variety. It's the spice of life.
(Although those 3 might start wishing they were dead)
Haunted by the thoughts of past actions even in your sleep.
I doubt there are many things worse than that.
Good work.
Happy Holidays 🎄
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Thank ye kindly.
So intense. However not quite enough to feel sorry for her or the others.
Well played. Carry on.
When will the story be finished
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Before the end of the month.
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Will they be able to recover from the nightmares
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I not about to spoil my own story, silly! You'll just have to wait and see!
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Okay I'll wait
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I can't wait to see the finished story
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All in good time.
Welp... this is not going to be easy to get past.
Monster/Mega Muffin Monday is why Derpy will never get administrative power again
AND SHE RAN she ran so far away, I'm sorry i know this is a serious story, but like She just ran, she ran all night and day, couldn't get away.
Just in case you don't know this reference its a song by the band "flock of seagulls"
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I get the reference. Yeah, the story is serious, but not so serious (example: suicidal characters) that I'd get upset over it.
Besides, a little bit of humor is welcome to lighten the mood.
Thinking about hiding in the bathroom, closets or lockers? Come on Sweetie, do you think Demon/Sunset is stupid?
This is really a perfect dream punishment for Trixie. The irony of having your personal accomplishments overshadowed by your scheme for revenge is a perfect turnabout scenario that (for the most part) is extremely well done, and really captures the embodiment of what Trixie (as a character) is mostly likely to both fear and be the most hurt by.
That being said, I am going to have to say that having Sunset as the dark presence in their dreams, doesn't really help the character's standing. Obviously it's not the real one, but the way you've set this up has them coming across as more afraid of Sunset's wrath rather than guilty about the fact they hurt a innocent girl. Considering the fact the Sunset was once a bully, it really isn't a good look for her, especially now.
Sunset's dreams are awfully articulate. Like Twilight levels of articulate.
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well she was Celestia's student after all
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Good point. I forgot about that connection. Probably because I tend to see this level of literalness as more of a Twilight Sparkle thing.
That's weird?
Yeah, she's definitely having a nightmare right now.
Not her again! 😰
Oofity
Yikes!
And I thought this one wasn't gonna end on a sour note.
Ngl, I kinda want to laugh at that one. 😅
Sounds like someone is stage fright.
That's what happens when you upset your parents. And I've been there myself too. ðŸ˜
It's what you get for what you did. 😡
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I don't think that monster part was necessary.
Yeah, something is definitely wrong her! 😰
I don't like where this is going!!! 😥
Agreed.