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This story is a sequel to Anon-A-Miss: Anguish


The Crusaders: Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. Trixie Lulamoon. Wallflower Blush. Sunset Shimmer.

These six girls were at the epicenter of the Anon-A-Miss incident. With the day behind them, they'll discover that their troubles have only just begun...

Book One of Anon-A-Miss: Aftermath.

Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
Not Just Any Old Trilogy
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
TimberTwi Tales

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Comments ( 30 )

And so it begins.

Can't say it isn't deserved though.

Well, that one certainly took a turn. I mean, yeah they all did, true. Good on you for not simply having them all have essentially the same nightmare.

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I try not to rehash concepts if I feel I can avoid it. :twilightsmile:

Variety. It's the spice of life.

(Although those 3 might start wishing they were dead)

Haunted by the thoughts of past actions even in your sleep.

I doubt there are many things worse than that.

Good work.
Happy Holidays 🎄

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Thank ye kindly.

So intense. However not quite enough to feel sorry for her or the others.

Well played. Carry on.

When will the story be finished

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Before the end of the month.

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Will they be able to recover from the nightmares

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I not about to spoil my own story, silly! You'll just have to wait and see! :derpytongue2:

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I can't wait to see the finished story

Welp... this is not going to be easy to get past.:fluttershysad:

Monster/Mega Muffin Monday is why Derpy will never get administrative power again

Once on the ground, she ran. She ran fast and far,

AND SHE RAN she ran so far away, I'm sorry i know this is a serious story, but like She just ran, she ran all night and day, couldn't get away.
Just in case you don't know this reference its a song by the band "flock of seagulls"

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I get the reference. Yeah, the story is serious, but not so serious (example: suicidal characters) that I'd get upset over it.

Besides, a little bit of humor is welcome to lighten the mood. :twilightsmile:

Thinking about hiding in the bathroom, closets or lockers? Come on Sweetie, do you think Demon/Sunset is stupid?

This is really a perfect dream punishment for Trixie. The irony of having your personal accomplishments overshadowed by your scheme for revenge is a perfect turnabout scenario that (for the most part) is extremely well done, and really captures the embodiment of what Trixie (as a character) is mostly likely to both fear and be the most hurt by.

That being said, I am going to have to say that having Sunset as the dark presence in their dreams, doesn't really help the character's standing. Obviously it's not the real one, but the way you've set this up has them coming across as more afraid of Sunset's wrath rather than guilty about the fact they hurt a innocent girl. Considering the fact the Sunset was once a bully, it really isn't a good look for her, especially now.

Flash Sentry stepped from the shadows. "You treated me horribly when we dated," he said angrily. "You were my first girlfriend. What you did to me will shape my future relationships!"

Sunset's dreams are awfully articulate. Like Twilight levels of articulate.:rainbowderp:

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well she was Celestia's student after all

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Good point. I forgot about that connection. Probably because I tend to see this level of literalness as more of a Twilight Sparkle thing.

Sweetie Belle logged onto EweTube, and grinned with delight. Her favorite EweTuber just uploaded a video! The thumbnail was... a picture of Sunset Shimmer's silhouette with question marks in a red background?

That's weird? :unsuresweetie:

Sweetie Belle yelped and fell off of her chair. Turning around, she saw the rocker stand over her.

Yeah, she's definitely having a nightmare right now. :fluttershysad:

Sunset Shimmer's body was now completely crimson. She wore a dress of flames and sported a tail and hair of the same. She flapped her red wings as she ascended. Her blue eyes stared the Crusader down. "Now allow me to return the favor!"

Not her again! 😰

"But I want to talk to you!" Scootaloo sped up, getting closer and closer until her scooter abruptly stopped. With a yelp, the Crusader nearly hit her face on a sidewalk. She slowly got up and took off her helmet. That was strange... she didn't see anything ahead of her that could've caused this to happen. Upon inspecting the ground, she noticed her scooter got stuck in a pit or tar.

Oofity

Sunset Shimmer's scream reverberated through the Crusader's ears, and the sheer force of it sent her flying into a wall... where she lost consciousness.

Yikes! :fluttershyouch:

Apple Bloom's eyes widened as she saw her sister and her friends form a protective circle around Sunset Shimmer, who was beside herself with emotion. The sky darkened immediately, and all plant life slowly withered and decayed around her.

And I thought this one wasn't gonna end on a sour note. :facehoof:

Celestia smiled as Trixie walked past her. "Good morning, Anon-A-Miss," she said cheerfully.

Ngl, I kinda want to laugh at that one. 😅

A blinding light emanated from the door, and Trixie suddenly found herself on stage, behind the curtain with the sounds of people murmuring. She blinked in confusion, then yelped once she realized that she had no props, or even her favorite magician's hat! She nearly froze in place, but took a deep breath. This was nothing. She could be great and powerful even without the necessary tools!

Sounds like someone is stage fright. :ajsmug:

Wallflower covered her mouth in shock. She had never seen Erica cry before!

That's what happens when you upset your parents. And I've been there myself too. 😠

Wallflower Blush woke up, then ran to the bathroom as a massive wave of guilt and anxiety clutched her stomach hard.

It's what you get for what you did. 😡

Applejack grinned. "Sounds like a plan. See yo monster u after class!"

?

"I know, right? Who would've thought that Muffin Monday would become Monster Muffin Monday?"

I don't think that monster part was necessary. :fluttershysad:

"I think I might have to..." Sunset began to feel dizzy, then passed out.

Yeah, something is definitely wrong her! 😰

"...I heard that you were a monster ."

I don't like where this is going!!! 😥

"This is worse than I thought, girls," Twilight said. "I think we need to come up with a plan before school, even if it means we get no sleep."

Agreed.

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