Reflections

How do you know who you are, when you are so many things in one? This is a story about discovering who you are, and what that means to you. It's a reflective piece meant for most readers to be able to connect with Ocellus.
Preread by: BezierBallad and Cosmic Eclipse.
Edited by: Skyward Sword.

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TikiBat

TikiBat #1 · Aug 6th, 2019 · · ·

I really like the message in this, great story!

The Bricklayer

The Bricklayer #2 · Aug 6th, 2019 · 1 · ·

A wonderful little piece, with a surprisingly deep meaning here. Pharynx is best older brother.

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #3 · Aug 6th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Great message of finding one's self though there wasn't explanation what Thorax and his brother were doing there at that point in time. Though I like each brother's viewpoint

BezierBallad

BezierBallad #4 · Aug 6th, 2019 · · ·

Great job on finally finishing this!

Applefai

Applefai #5 · Aug 6th, 2019 · · ·

Good story there is a part where you need a space but other than that it's a great story

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The next morning she awoke in her bed, having no clue how she had gotten there. She wondered if Thorax had decided to check on her and put her to bedBut when she glanced around her dorm room for any sign of him, she swore she saw Chrysalis towering over her. But thankfully it was just a shadow being cast.

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