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Sarcastic Brony
Give me one reason Celestia isn't best pony. Pro tip: You can't
Sarcastic Brony
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This was both very good and interesting. I look forward to see where it goes.
Nothing like being a butler to one of the most powerful ponies around.
Good stuff
leave the place that serves cake without paying
This is my shit
But what about Philomina? Did Anon also pets and feeds her? Because if he do, I can imagine Philomina be friendly with him. He pets her stomach with her approval and Celestia finds herself jealous of her own pet
Very good!
YES, FINALLY! ANOTHER STORY!
Amazing story, Wish there was more to it ;)
I will be following your stories more intently from now on
Well aint this just the bees knees
A nice little slice of romance right there. Simple, but cute.
Definitely going to follow this with great interest!
He doesn't like cake. There's NO WAY this relationship is going to last
The scene with Derpy was helluva cute, tho'
you have peaked my interest mortal, please by all means...
continue...
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No it is perfect, he won't die getting between Celestia and cake! ;)
Though how strong does he have to be to throw Celestia out of her bed? She must weigh a fair amount in comparison to him so that can not be an easy task!
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Being fair, he didn't lift her wholesale. He just pulled the sheet and rolled her down it, that should be much easier. That said, glorious mental image. :)
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Something tells me that he will if the mature tag is any indication.
Top floor story we have here. My praise to the author writing a eye grabber such as this
spicy 👌
Well, I'm interested in this story already. Glad to finally read a story where they, the couple, don't take like the first 20 chapters to finally admit they like each other and start dating. I'll be looking forward to the other chapters with great anticipation.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Little bit of a stumbly start, but some good humor towards the end of this first chapter. I'll wait and see what you do with it.
A good effort, but ultimately way too fast paced. Anon is dropping L bombs all over the place in the first chapter, no less, and Celestia is lapping it up like cake frosting. There is barely any interaction between the two to show that they may have feelings for each other, instead it is mostly explained to us.
That said, I hope you attempt to revise this. I was really quite enjoying it at the start.
*Edited this comment because I realised the original could come across as condescending, which was not my intention. I'm not hating on the story. I just see potential for a really great romance fic.
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The story was intended to end here but interest from the commissioner had me continue for a few more chapters. I will not revise this story. It's done and chapters will be posted until completed.
WHAT?!!
is that it? i wanna know how twilight fucked up!!!
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If it's already complete, then why not post all the chapters at once?
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Public releases have a delay while Patrons get it immediately.
How could the desecrate that apple like that?
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Do you have a timeframe for how often chapters will get released to non-patrons? Weekly? Monthly? Also are you able (or willing) to say how many chapters total this story is?
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Weekly releases. There are four total chapters, but the last two will be posted together as one is short clop.
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Ah, gotcha. Thanks a bunch!
Goddamn I love your work dude.
Wholesome, grounded and a thoroughly enjoyable read. Cheers
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Agreed.
HAH nice would never expect twilight to ask that i would have assumed pinkie or rarity
I can see how returning to earth would be a terrifying concept that could happen to him. Hopefully it won't.
Wow.
I mean my only complaint is that haven't done the deed yet but that is rather subjective but wow.
This is such a genuine story.
this is nice and sweet, approved!
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After the issue with her brother I'm not surprised.
Twilight! Are you his daughter or his mom?
I don’t know why but this story seems like the beginning of a story written by Zamairiac.
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It can't be both
Haven't enjoyed a new human/celistia story in a while. Thanks for the great read!
awwww!
Celestia grins while rolling her eyes. “In your dreams.”
“I’ll take it!”
Haha! It's gold! Haha!
That was great, excellent work here Sarcastic. But the real question is, what needed Anons attention? Also, why the change in Celestia's title to queen? It is quite unusual, then again, using the title of princess was unusual to begin with.
Anon is going to have one weird wet dream tonight. And so many questions if Luna play troll and made him 'sleep fuck' as well.
Hmmm…would that count as having sex with two woman at the same time?
Sequel? Or maybe bonus chapters or side stories?
I love the story as much as I read of it. But I simply have to stop I always enjoy the stories written by sarcastic but this time I had to stop.
The Asylum scene is good when used properly. I'm not saying it wasn't to anyone else but to myself it was out of nowhere. There was no foreboding towards it the possibility of it of him fearing of it not being real. But I do really love the story
Heaven isn't to far away