Ever since being relieved of the majority of her major duties, Celestia has been extremely bored. Anon takes notice of her having a particularly bad night and gets her to confess her real problems.
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This was a cute treat, thank you.
Anon's "sleeve" is such an interesting color and shape in the image there.
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This was an enjoyable read. Thank you.
Blessings on the hand of women!
Fathers, sons, and daughters cry,
And the sacred song is mingled
With the worship in the sky—
Mingles where no tempest darkens,
Rainbows evermore are hurled;
For the hand that rocks the cradle
Is the hand that rules the world.
To all of you wonderful people reading and commenting on this, I just wanna say you guys have made me so happy with the overwhelming response this little fic of mine has gotten.
I honestly didn't think it was my best work when I posted it but I couldn't be more glad you guys have proved me wrong.
Stay awesome you guys, I can't wait to write more for you!
Bloody brilliant read mate, cheers for that! Lightened my day right up!
This was incredible! You are an amazing author. Any plans to continue this?
The fluffiness...it consumes me.
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Thank you very much!
No, I don't think this particular series will continue, but I am planning on doing more stories like these based off of the Doing Loving Things images.
Cute. Very nice.
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Well said, couldn’t agree more
After a long day at work I needed this.
Thanks for this Story you make buddy,,,
Vanilla in my heart
I adored that. And Momlestia in the end? Pitch Perfect!
> Every other suitor I’ve ever had almost immediately turned away when they found out I would inevitably outlive them
So she's only been courted by idiots and people from very long ago. I wonder if there was some other cause.
Aww that was so sweet!
I'm just gonna assume there was some magic involved, either a transmogrification spell or something to make those two genetically compatible to reproduce.
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I'm honestly glad someone pointed it out, and I'm definitely considering rewriting that exchange a bit to make it better sounding as a whole.
I usually write these at 2AM so I'm bound to make small errors like these.
Absolutely heartwarming. I do have a minor nitpick, though. It's an issue that came up throughout the story
The thing I noticed was how you mixed past and present tense. In most stories people stick to past tense for most narration, as if someone was telling the story of something that happened in the past. They'd use 'said' rather than 'says,' for instance. You used present tense for most of this tale.
The problem was that I think you intuitively feel that past tense 'sounds right,' and you end up using even when you've been using present tense everywhere else.
In this paragraph you initially say anon 'stood' outside her door, but then Celestia 'opens' the door. It should probably be either 'stands' and 'opens,' or (as I would write it) 'stood' and 'opened.'
I have no issues with this story. It's a great read. What I do have an issue with is the rating. You explicitly mentioned private parts. Example:
I think that T would be the proper rating for this story rather than E. Other than that, good job.
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Thanks for pointing that out, probably because I was also working on a first person POV story at the time.
Honestly, thisnwas some cute Celestia fluff. It's pacing was rough at a few parts, and word repetition rampant, but over all enjoyable. Also, probably the best part:
That was solid, and made me laugh, but also just felt... genuine.
Adorable
Nice little wholesome story. Well done oneshot
Well that escalated quickly.