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Princess Celestia, one of Equestria's immortal rulers has returned from a date with a notable oddity in Equestria. That of Anonymous the human, a strange creature, lacking in magic, however not lacking in courage. As he was the first being in just over three thousand years to ask Celestia out on a date.

Luna is eagerly awaiting her sister, to hear all the juicy details about her sister's night out.

Teen rated due to sexual references played for comedy.

This is a prose remastering of a Greentext written for /Sun/Day on the MLP board of 4chan, if you'd prefer to read the original version, Click here

Featured as of 27/2/21
Holy shit thank you so much!

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There's a couple slip-up mistakes here and there, especially at the beginning, but besides that - short, sweet and fluffy. Uncharacteristic for an 'anon' fic. Good times!

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Once I've got the time I'll probably go back and fix the mistakes in the beginning.
Glad you liked it though!

I love it. Tia is so adorable in this story and Luna is such a good sister <3

Ha ha! Tuskany! I like it, very clever. If you dont mind i just might use that in the future.

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More than happy for you to use it!

Okay this was adorable and hilarious, think we could get a sequel?

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This was written originally as one of four prompts that anons gave me on /sun/day.

I might knock together a sequel following Celestia's surprise visit to Anon, cause I have a few ideas.

The other prompts I do wanna work on, because one was adorable. Filly Luna and Celestia playing tag across the palace from the PoV of a guard trying to catch them

You mention "Silver Fang" as the Captain who first speaks to Luna but also the pony Luna asks said pony to accompany Luna to see her sister. As in two different ponies with the same name or am I missing something? :duck:

It's the same pony, sorry if I didn't make that clear. I was considering having a little shorter story involving Luna and Silverfang as a potential ship but I never got around to writing it

"Nothing of the sort! He was asking about Starswirl, apparently what Twilight had told him reminded him of an ancient wizard from his own world."

please tell me it's Gandalf, please tell me it's Gandalf, PLEASE TELL ME IT'S GANDALF!

"Gandalf the Grey was apparently a rather famous character from some literary epic from his home.

YES, WE HAVE A WINNER! :yay:

I enjoyed this story very much!

I didn't know know what panna cotta was as i've never seen it before and now i know. It is always very nice to see authors use their culture in some way to enrich the story.

This story was very enjoyable thanks for writing it!

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Thanks man, glad you enjoyed the story!

In response to Luna's question. Celestia, Princess of the Sun, Co-ruler of Equestria, your older sister, squeals like a filly that had just returned from prom.

Celestia's my older sister!?

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Oop, I knew I'd missed something, originally this was written as a 2nd person perspective greentext.

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