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Hazy and Star Sparkle, daughters of Princess Twilight Sparkle, wake up to find themselves in the ruins of the palace of the royal pony sisters. Scared and confused, they explore the ruins in search of answers to what happened or where they are. Only to come to the realisation, the question isn't where, but when.

Realising that they're in the past, before their own births and without the ability to call upon their mother to save them. These two will have to face every threat and danger their mother told them about in hushed tones at night. However their actions will change the course of the future and force the pair to forge their own destinies.

Armed with their mother's stories and new friends, will the two sister's find that friendship is truly magic?

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After one total rewrite, Daughters of Dusk finally sees the light of day! This is an Alt Universe/Alt History fic, inspired by me and a friend questioning "what if the Alicorn versions of our OCs wound up in the show during season 1?"

So, in an attempt to answer this question I've started to write this! Tackling the story one season at a time, with an entirely different cast of element of harmony bearers.

Expect some surprises for who will be the element bearers, a lot of changes from canon, and hopefully a good story along the way!

Special Thanks to
TheStarSquid for Editing help and letting me use Star Sparkle
Galzra for Proof reading as always
My other amazing proof reader, RRB

Cannot thank them both enough, I wouldn't be writing without their encouragement and support

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 32 )

Interesting start. I'm watching to see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

You might want to throw in the OC tag.

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I knew I'd miss something, I should sort a checklist for posting stuff

Did the rest of the Mane Six have children too?

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It's not really related to the story so if I'm honest I haven't even considered that

This is a wonderful start to this story. I'll be adding this to my list and throwing you a watch lol

Aww, the cloaks lined with silver is a really great idea. Not only magic-wise but also style-wise. :heart:

before she leaned down to nuzzle the top of her sister's head. She took care to be mindful of her sister's horn. Hazy had made the mistake of not being wary of its slightly pointed tip before.

Hmm... I'm not sure how, but to spear oneself upon another's horn must be an accomplishment in itself. I suppose the smaller horn of a filly wouldn't yet be long enough to easily be avoidable, but then it wouldn't also be nearly sharp enough to hurt yourself with by a casual nuzzle. The only thing that comes to mind that would actually get hurtful pretty fast is a fight between siblings... I see, I see. :trixieshiftright:

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It's a mistake Hazy's only made once and will never make again :rainbowlaugh:
Hard to poke yourself in the eye if you're Luna nuzzling Celestia with her like 9 inch long horn. Meanwhile a Smol filly horn lurking just above her mane, that'd a landmine waiting to poke you in the eye.

Finally.A story about son or daughter of the mane 6 go through time

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Glad you like it! Ch3 is in the works so stay tuned for that!

Realising that they're in the past, before their own births and without the ability to call upon their mother to save them.

Can't they just track Twilight down? It isn't like she's trying to keep a low profile, and even if they do want to keep a low profile I'm sure she'd still want to help them get home.

This story will stay in my favorites great job

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Honestly I don't think pre-show Twilight would, she'd likely immediately ask princess Celestia what to do. Also, sorry for the slow response didn't see your comment til now 😅


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Glad you like it!

It’s okay...I won’t tell anypony, but friendships can’t be built on a lie. I learned that the hard way.

Wise words for someone so young. :twilightsmile:

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Kids can sometimes wind out being smarter than adults when it comes to that kinda stuff

The number of mysteries, and consequent count of plot threads, is multiplying. :applejackunsure:

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Hopefully the next chapter should clear up some of the characters pasts Particularly Sweetie and Diamond's past

Although some stuff I've got planned to answer after Nightmare Moon's defeat

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I'm not actually particularly confused by them. Four Leaf is, by far, the most confusing aspect of this story.

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That's fair, I'm planning on explaining her presence post NMM's defeat alongside the reveal of this timeline's celestia's plan.

Sorry about how confusing it is, my plan of getting chapters 4 and 5 out at the same time didn't really survive first encounter with real life, however I'm about 1k words into it so it should be done hopefully by the 15th or so.

i love this great ch thank you

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Yeah but although Celestia might not ask about the future there is no way twilight won't want to know about it especially considering this is the pony who time traveled just to tell herself to relax.

7 fillies, 6 elements, and NM just found them....

Oooh boy, this is going to be something.

Yea me too another great ch thank u

I really love this but what happens next?

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Still working on these stories, just kinda got smashed by real life

There isn't much of a description for the characters, also if you're still out there is this story ever going to continue because I really love it.

Wow, just came across this and I really love the premise. Sad it's on hiatus though.

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Well I hope someday you consider returning hope you are at least doing alright.

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Oh my goodness that's great, also who's the one responsible for the cover art on this story, it's amazing 😍

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An artist I know via discord named Mo, I'll ask 'em if they mind having their info shared publicly

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