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PoneFluff


Newbie writer, Luna/Fluttershy Best ponies

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This story is a sequel to Breakfast Fit For a Princess


A few weeks after his trip up to Canterlot to take the elder Alicorn on a surprisingly successful date, Anon's life has returned to normal. Aside from a last-minute booking for a massage at his job, today is looking like it'll be rather average. However, Celestia has other plans.


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Teen rated due to sexual references played for comedy as well as some sexual tension. This won't feature clop don't worry.
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I hadn't planned on a sequel to breakfast, but when I saw how much people liked it, I figured I should give a sequel a shot. So what else would make sense but for Celestia to pay Anon a visit in ponyville and have some shenanigans ensue.

You should read the original to understand the context behind this, but it isn't mandatory.

Featured as of 31/03/21 - Didn't expect that but that's amazing

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Comments ( 16 )

This was sooooo adorable to read! love it!

Comment posted by Nerfer22 deleted March 31st
Comment posted by Nerfer22 deleted March 31st

This is very cute, you did a great job.

“I love you, Anon.”

“I love you too, Tia.”

Only criticism I have is that this is kind of sudden. As for the side story about Luna and that guard, I would say drop it all together. It doesn't really seem to be a very big part of the story. There is enough potential here to make a sequel to this story, or just outright continue it.

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The first version was about 5K words and had more build up to the I love you, but the rest of it was a mess.

I might re-edit this in the future I don't really know

This was very amusing to read! A nice sequel to a good story :yay::heart:

And don't mind the fool right under me, he probably forgot to drink his morning coffee:rainbowlaugh:👇👇

Thanks for the fluff :heart:
I loved it!
Also, I liked the part about Rose adding flavor to the bouquet. It just clicked for me that the flower stand is actually doubles as a food stall. Like those bouquets made out of fruits.

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Glad you liked it!

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Flower stands as fast food is underrated in my opinion when it comes to fics, I've seen some go really in-depth with the flavour of flowers and it fascinated me as an idea

I loved it. I do hope you continue with their story.

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I make no promises, but if the urge to write these two strikes I'll probably make some other little stories

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Still don't know why he commented

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