Rarity tries to come to grips with the loss of Sweetie Belle.
Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork
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I promise I'll make it up to her ...
Why make this kind of story? This is freakin' depressing.
It was really sad, though I could absolutely believe it.
It would be hard moving forward after something that sad.
Why must your stories be so tragic...
Ok, in tears on. Well done.
I mean I should leave some sort of constructive thought or something, but really, the fact I am crying means the story achieved its goal. Well done I guess.
Seriously, Sweetie Belle though? Of all the Ponies to kill, it had to be her? You may as well kick a puppy.
*wipes tears away* Ok, better now. Seriously, you captured the post loss depression REALLY well, and the pointlessness of platitudes that many people feel when they hear them offered after such an event. As well as the idea of unfulfilled potential of such a young death.
For a story less then 1.5k words the emotions you achieved are fairly impressive as well.
She could do with a friendly changeling to cheer her up.
No.....SNIFF.....not Sweetie......SNIFF......
*sob* Poor CMC.........*sob*
Oh cruel, cruel world!!!! DARN IT!!!! *sob!*
Well written.....but now, I need tissue.......sniff!
Oh god give me a moment please I'm reading another fic at the moment. I'll be coming right back to this.... Not sure if I want to cry at the moment.
Buckin' hell...'Kay, keep it together Sparky...keep it together...keep *voice crack* it together...