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This story takes place shortly after Season 2 Episode 4 “Luna Eclipsed”.
Twilight is surprised, and a little concerned to receive an invitation to meet with Princess Luna at Canterlot Castle.
Could she be wanting to settle a score over Nightmare Moon, or does she perhaps have another purpose in mind?
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This was such a good story!
loved it. lol very seiso
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Thank you for your kind words - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Drop by again soon!
This was very sweet. Loved that it was direct to the point without losing any of the characterization. Loved it!
Nice start - will be interesting to see where this goes
That is definitely the pensive, uncertain Twilight that I know.
I like how the two are interacting; Twilight unsure of things and Luna uncertain herself, and then they start relaxing.
And then there was Friendship :)
Does anyone else ever get the feeling that Spike is purposefully lighting the fuse to make Twilight start worrying, then just sits back and watches the fireworks?
The blood red moon kind of reminds me of the Legend of Zelda breath of the wild when I had to experience that
It sounds as though Luna simply arranged a lunar eclipse. Much cheaper than purchasing all the paint that would be needed to cover it.
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Thank you!
I really enjoy working with these characters and imagining how they would interact.
It's nice when it works out!
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Too late for second thoughts now - the message has been sent!
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She is a bit prone to overthinking things and getting in a panic!
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They're two really nice characters who just have a few difficulties getting to know each other in the early days ...
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Yay!!
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I think he's just trying to be protective in his own dragonish sort of way, but how he does it can sometimes have unexpected consequences!
Loved he story would love to see more like this
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Thank you for your kind words.
You are welcome to look through the stories in my back catalogue if you would like.
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I think Discord usually does that, too, but Spike is still a young dragon. Kids'll be kids.
Nice bit of Slice of Life.
Well done!
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Wow! Thanks for that clip - dramatic stuff!
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Not just the paint, but the brushes too ...
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Appreciate it - thanks!
Interesting worldbuilding detail. Makes me quite curious.
Interesting
Nice touch with the batponies
Interesting take on the batponies
Lovely!
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Thanks for all your great feedback - very much appreciated!
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Youre welcome
I would love to see more of the friendship between the Princess of the Night and Twilight Sparkle!
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Like you, I enjoy the way their personalities complement each other. You may want to try Nyx Returns in which their friendship develops into a romance.