Fluttershy has an out of body experience and discovers what it means to have magic.
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Bronyxy
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Never met a draconequus that wasn't magic ...
Great to see you again, and thanks for your kind words!
There's only one Discord ...
This story is funny and thought provoking at the same time. Well done!
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Thank you!
I really enjoyed writing Discord's kind of randomness and also showing how much he cares for Fluttershy.
Here have an upvote.
I enjoyed it
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Hope to see you again soon!
Thank you - always appreciated
It was really different how instead of just having Discord switch their bodies, Fluttershy had to control things inside a cockpit with the use of a joystick and colorful buttons - very unexpected, and quite chaotic.
I will say though, that despite this having been written rather nicely, you do seem to consistently make certain grammatical errors, so I'll be sending you a PM to address those - but your story was still coherent regardless, so that's good.
It makes sense that Fluttershy would want to use great power to simply help creatures more effectively, and perhaps even on a grander scale. One criticism I will voice however, is that the moral Discord succeeds in teaching Fluttershy: that magical power can end up causing more harm than good, is rendered sort of moot by the fact that he fixes everything she messed up by using his magic.
I'm not saying I'd like this to be a tragedy, but the moral and the conclusion are definitely at odds with one another. Additionally, everything Fluttershy did could just as easily have happened without the use of magic, since she helps injured animals all the time.
Still, this was an enjoyable read with some cute Discord/Fluttershy friendshipping. I encourage you to keep writing and developing your talents, and I thank you for sharing this story with us.
I'm just gonna leave this here for the people who don't get the 'Ministry of Silly Walks' reference.
Well this was a pretty interesting story seeing how Fluttershy went to discords head literally to see if she can handle the magic said that he has even though she did got a hang of it there were some consequences apparently and she realized not every magic can't help at least not all the time and it was sweet that Discord confront her and of course the ending was pretty random but this was a pretty interesting story keep up the good work
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Thanks - this was a fun story to write, but one with a deeper message too.
So pleased you enjoyed it!