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This story takes place after Season 6 Episode 02 “The Crystalling – Part 2” and “Rainbow Rocks”.
Something has gone wrong with the Crystal Mirror and it just so happens to be on a day when Princess Twilight is rolling out the red carpet for a high level delegation from the Dragon Lands led by Princess Ember.
Could Twilight have made a mistake when she rigged up Celestia’s book to the portal?
Who or what could now end up coming through the portal …?
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I feel it's irresponsible to have the crossover tag but not list what the other story it's mixing is in the description.
BEST. STORY. EVERRRRRR!
This was magnificently written, my friend!! With just the right amount of suspense!
You have earned yourself a like and...ooh...ten mustaches!
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Wow! Ten moustaches - thanks!
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Calling Mlp/Equestria girls a crossover is kind of stretching it.... they're pretty much the same franchise set in the same fictional universe.... <.<
Though honestly your reply is a bit much... You could've just said ''Take another look at the tags'' ... Didn't need to start acting as if Arzoo had dishonored your entire family line or something o.o
Also side note: Not sure that's quite sarcasm.... pretty sure that's just mockery o.o Though I guess I could be wrong~
Are you sure YOU aren't the one needing glasses? =P <---- Example of sarcasm using the irony of your own words against you o.o
But~ As I said I'm not 100% sure... Sarcasm happens to be my weak-point :/ Though it's very fun to use against friends ^^
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OK, thanks everyone for your support and comments.
I really appreciate you all taking the trouble to read this story, but I think I would like to bring this particular thread to a close.
I hope you all enjoyed the story, and thanks to all of you for your support.
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They literally are in the same setting. There's a magic portal and they can send each other messages. They are humanized characters with the same names and personalities.
Thank you for making it clear to me that the issue is that the crossover tag shouldn't be used rather than there being an omission in the description.
I'll pass on the sass, though.
My apologies for the agressive sarcasm. I made a promise to myself when I first started on this site that I wouldn't go crazy with my comments.
I did just what I told myself I wouldn't.
In retrospect, I really need to learn to think twice before I speak...er, type.
Doesn't this kinda mean that starlight actions caused massive genocide because those worlds didn't vanish and shes the reason those worlds exist ?
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Not the way I see it.
If you subscribe to the belief that there is an infinite number of parallel universes, then all Glimmy did was to cross lines between two parallel realities that already existed, and once the link was broken they both continued on their own separate timelines.
Good question though!
My biggest issue of the story was timing, breaking points between human world and Pony world, and the spacing between characters. A lot of it was rushed however I did enjoy the story overall.
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.
ironically, Cadence is a character who can theoretically stop the Nightmare moon with just one spell. As Cadence said earlier, her magic allows the target to remember all the warm feelings and love that have been forgotten or buried in consciousness. If we take into account the fact that nightmare moon is Princess Luna's alterego mired in envy and anger, then the magic of Cadence should remind Nightmare moon that once before her fall she loved her sister, thereby removing the veil of rage.
Although theoretically this can only work if there is no helmet on the head of Nightmare moon at the time of casting the spell. When I mention the characters who wear the helmet, Magneto is the first to come to my mind. who wears a helmet so that no one can influence his mind, read his mind, or enter his dreams. (in special moments of anxiety, he even sleeps with a helmet on).
for some reason I want to believe that the nightmare moon wears a helmet for a similar reason, as if completely closing from everyone and telling others (especially my sister): "your poisonous lies will no longer work on me, out of my head!"
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The only problem I have with this is that I don’t think any of the princesses would be as timid and submissive as they were made out to be when threatened by nightmare moon, it was otherwise very good