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elPossenreisser


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After the Dazzlings have been defeated, Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer have to deal with missing each other. Writing each other through the books soon leads to a surprise visit in the human world as well as blossoming feelings.

Human Twilight Sparkle is zeroing in on the sources of all those mysterious energy outbursts, eager to find out what’s going on.

When she causes an accident, Sunset and Twilight realize how precarious an inter-dimensional relationship can be, and Sunset is forced to deal with the human world's Twilight.

Chapters (18)
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First!!11! :yay:

So um, yeah, new story, huh... it's gonna be a bit longer than my other stuff. Expect weekly updates and enjoy the show :twilightsmile:

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Thats cheating, you cant post on your own story... but still, clever way to stop it before it starts.

Comment posted by RisingBluePhoenix deleted July 9th

By how the description sounds like, it would seem that some way that this would be a Sunset/Twiangle ship.

Just pointing it out. As someone who really likes the princess Sunlight ship, this has me worrying me a bit.

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Oh, sorry for the confusion :twilightblush: no Twiangles here

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:ajsmug:

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Thats great to hear!

Considered this story followed!

I'm very interested to see how these two fall in love though their journals.

This sounds really good. I can't wait for more.

This gonna be explicit writing? HMMMMM NICE STORY :pinkiecrazy:

Welp, guess we have a passion rollin' between those two, don't we? OHHHH I'M TAKING EVERY SECOND OUT OF THIS. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks :twilightsmile:

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Thank you :twilightsmile: it won't be explicit. More network TV, not HBO.

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Bleh, oh well, but mentioned at least? :raritywink: *edit: When you'll be writing C2 and so forth, and how long you plan on keeping this on? :twilightsmile:

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Chapter two will be out this weekend; subsequent chapters every 5-7 days. It'll be 15-20 chapters in total.

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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH damn, I swear i'll read every chapter of it! But well, a week of hiatus for a chapter? Oh well, you must be a busy person, hell, almost half a year of storyline? Actually, try to write +5k words pleasey? :3 Hope you do a great job though. :yay:

Uhm... Chapter two? :fluttershysad:

Nice, liked and followed! This is going pretty well so far, make more.

Oh my gosh, that hand holding scene was so good!!!! I mean, awwwww!!!!!:heart:

Really well done chapter. Really looking forward for the next one. Maybe some cheek nuzzling next time? Oh who cares!

Well I wonder how many near misses between Sci-Twi and our two love birds will happen? This will make the Friendship Games ending far more interesting.

This is adorable! Can't wait to see where this leads.

This chapter is so sweet! :twilightsmile:

Can't wait for more!

I’m loving the story so far! I can’t wait till the next chapter :heart:

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Thank you all very much :twilightsmile: there will be more, promise :rainbowdetermined2:

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Ah, I probably shoulda mentioned that somewhere - I'm pretty much bypassing the plot of Friendship Games entirely. That said, yeah, I too wonder how often that's gonna happen *dun dun duuun* :raritywink:

Call me crazy, but do I hear wedding bells off in the distance :raritywink::rainbowlaugh:

Amazing story, beautifully written. Hope to read more soon

Lucky human Twilight didn't go through the portal while she was over there. Explaining that would have been hard. I can only imagine how badly pre-Friendship Games Sci-Twi would have freaked out if she had gone through and suddenly found herself transported to a different world and turned into a magical talking pony. :rainbowlaugh:

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Absolutely. Holding hands => two-week engagement => marriage. It's basically a law of nature at this point :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you :twilightsmile: glad you like it!

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:rainbowlaugh: awkward! (also hilarious)

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So true of that law, especially with Sunset & which Twilight, she gets ship with. :rainbowlaugh:

Great story. Can't wait for more. :twilightsmile:

Yay! The next chapter is another date night! :pinkiehappy:

Poor Sci-Twi. If she only knew that she is picking up the private messages between two young lovers. Hopefully she will get something on her walk with Spike so she doesn't get too frustrated.

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Not the messages, but Twilight using the portal to visit.

Seeing her duplicate should be interesting for both sides.

Sunset nodded, grinning at her friend’s enthusiasm as they entered the diner. But before they had started for a free table, a familiar voice behind them spoke. “Twilight Sparkle?”

My thoughts on Brad here:

I do wonder if Human Sunset Shimmer appears, that would be an epic plot twist later on.

Oh boy, Sunset was in full jealous mode on Flash, watch out buddy or else you'll be 6 feet under! :rainbowlaugh:

I’m confused. Why are they acting like Flash doesn’t know Twilight comes from an alternate dimension? “We don’t have cell phones back home” should’ve been an explanation he’d get?

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I went by the assumption that Flash (or anyone else) doesn't know the details of Twilight's origin - iirc she only really told her friends in Equestria Girls. I agree that it's a more reasonable assumption that he'd know, but I decided to spin it the other way to tie in with the theme of Sci Twi's investigations. Sorry if this was confusing.

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:rainbowlaugh:

I can’t wait for sunset to meet sci-twi XD

Early chapter because RL. Enjoy :twilightsmile:

Yay!!!!!!!!! Early chapter!!!

I'm going to guess that its going to take at least 2 or 3 more chapters till the big "you know what". :pinkiehappy:

Sweet early chapter!

Poor Sunset, she didn't like the idea of Twilight and Flash dating but she couldn't figure it out "why". :fluttershysad:

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No complaints here. :twilightsmile:

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I don't like the idea either, and I'm pretty sure I know why. :derpytongue2:

Poor, poor Sunset. I really do feel bad for her. It’s so obvious that she wants Twilight to be her marefriend (or girlfriend, in this case). I get the feeling that this is going to get bad with Sunset’s jealousy before it gets better.

Hell, this is getting better and better. :yay:

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