It is the day before the Fall Formal when the beautifully decorated gym erupts in a mysterious slime explosion. Rainbow Dash, although innocent, is sentenced to clean up the mess, while the Fall Formal is being postponed, much to the chagrin of the other students.
Twilight offers her help to the distressed Rainbow Dash. As they start cleaning the gym, they also have to face the angry reactions of the other students together. But Twilight has a secret agenda that Rainbow must not learn about.
Set in an alternate Equestria Girls universe where the events from the movie have not happened.
Written for Blundy’s Framed Challenge.
Rated Teen because sometimes Rainbow has a potty mouth.
Thanks to my prereaders: Invisible Pink Unicorn and He Who Wishes To Remain Unnamed.
I'll follow this! Awesome Idea!
So far, I LOVE it!
Interesting, let's see how this goes.
Consider me invested. I've been craving some EG TwiDash lately.
Equestria Girls TwiDash for the contest. You always know how to change things up.
Equestria Girls? Hmmm... Gotta say I was not expecting that one, but will welcome it.
*adds story onto the rest of contest stories he needs to read as a judge*
Good luck!
DJRD
EQG story from the writer of Daring Dash and Rosetta Sparkle in the Jungle of Perils?
Yes, please.
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What can I say... I'm a rebel at heart seriously though, the only ideas I could come up with for the prompt were super gruesome grimdark darkfics of gruesomeness, and I've learned from my last story (Haunted House) that I don't enjoy writing those - I just want my little ponies (or teenage girls based on litte ponies) happy and not in mortal peril
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Hope it'll live up to the expectations!
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It is indeed a rather small niche market, I believe (after some research )
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Thanks guys Hope you'll enjoy the story as it progresses!
:D I am liking this author! (Trying to sound Sweetie Belle-esque)
*Squees internally*
This is good, :me gusta:
Alright, you have my attention, sir...
OMG iz sooper cute!
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I am giving this a fav! I want to see how this will go--I'm excited!
So, they're going to share a milkshake at some point to establish their forever-long love. Fantastic.
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The person that did that comic is http://shikimaakemi.deviantart.com/
There is one with four panels, that one is the first, the rest of it is cute Twidash-ness!
And just to say this is getting really good. The flow is nice. I do feel bad for Twilight since she had no real involvement but it helps the story along. Keep up the good work!
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Squeeee! omg these are cute!!
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This... may have happened to the author while writing this. Squeeing internally. Yes. Strictly internally
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Thanks, you guys I'll do my best to keep it up
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Nobody said the universe was fair. High school, even less, I guess
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Young love, huh
LOVE it!
I am loving this Idea it is so well thought out!! The ooc is working really well for the others too, its hard to see her friends turning on dash, but it was great to see Flutter shy with some personalty! please keep it up this is fantastic!
This seems promising, though these first two chapters could pretty much have been put together into a single one, as they are a bit short and only establish the premise. I hope future chapters pick up the pace.
Well, I'm hooked.
Faved and upvoted.
I guess this is an alternate setting where this Twi is the Twi of this world, and the events of EQG hadn't occurred(seeing as how Sunset's still a total bitch). Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
I always imagined EQG Shining was a cop or something... of course I also always pictured Iron Will as the guidance counselor, too ("Don't be in doubt! ASK HER OUT!")
Wait wait, even EG Twilight messes up spells?!
The poor multiversal entity can't catch a break..
4120308 Bu..but no magic! She managed to mess up on semi magic in an apparently none magical setting! That boggles the mind. Its like if the Jedi didn't realize someone was plotting their demise from like a city block away!
4120369 -smirks- The prequels work alot better if you replace Dark Side with Plot. Meh, still decent movies..
Poor Twily.
What a twist!
AH HAH! *points* I knew it was her! Although, I could see her making a courage potion--just not a love potion... I just can't see Twilight not caring about someone else's free will. Oh well, we'll see what happens.
Still interested in how this mess will clean itself up.
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YEEEEEAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!
Sorry, couldn't help myself. Keep up good work!
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Exactly - the events of the movie have not occurred. I should have mentioned that
Also, Iron Will as guidance counselor is hilarious
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Poor girl, huh. I'm guessing her being super nervous that afternoon didn't really help. Or maybe the recipe was buggy?
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Thanks a lot also, there is a fix to the Star Wars movies that have never been made? How is that even possible?
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Not that bad a start to it, actually.
Seems you've disregarded a LOT of what EqG put forth, though, in favor of your own thing.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Ahsoka Tano makes up for a lot.
Besides, I liked the prequels.
Science fair needs a definite article.
So far, so good.
You seem to be taking the 'wrongful accusation' bit a bit far in my eyes, but it's workable.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Hah, in hindsight, Twilight as the perpetrator was something I should have seen coming.
Still, I liked the execution of it so far.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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4124172 that's what I was going for...
4124250 I know. All I did was add the sound effect for it.
now I'm curious to how exactly will Twilight be doomed
Me and my army supports this story
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Thanks fixed it.
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Thanks! Maybe I should have mentioned that in the description changed that.
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I can't disagree that I'm stretching it a bit there. I figured the jerks would gladly take the prompt to harrass someone, and whispered rumors would do the rest...
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It makes me happy that I managed to surprise you
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I hope Chapter 4 answers that
Oooohhhh the excrement hath struck the rotary ventilation device...
Also, the bullying and harassment? I've been through middle school and high school, and yes, it IS possible to have it feel like the whole school's against you.
What is that I see? IT'S A FREAKIN SHITSTORM!!!!!
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I think Twilight missed the memo...
Scared for Twi, Curious about the reaction of Dash, Perhaps some ice cream will solve everything.
This blew up faster than I expected...
wow the truth came out a lot sooner then I thought it would have. I hope this dose not mean the story is almost over
that actually blew up just about as fast as i thought it would. considering how many people were out to get the two of them, it was just a matter of time until someone found out it was her that made the mess.
Am I the only one who really wanted
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to be the gym teacher?