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Rainbowdash wanted to explore, and have awesome adventures in faraway lands, so when Twilight offered her the opportunity to go further than any pony has gone before, she took it. Now she's stranded on an Alien planet, with no way back home, and none of her friends. But she does find some very unlikely aid.

Ryley is a survivor from the spaceship Aurora, and as far as he can tell, he might be the only one, now after just having his hopes of rescue dashed, he is suddenly confronted with a different survivor, one who might just help him find a way of this planet after all.

Together the unlikely pair now need to uncover the mysteries of why they're both here, and what else is on Planet 4546B.


A crossover with the Game Subnautica, a highly entertaining game that I seriously suggest you play before reading this, or even if you don't read this story, just play the game, its good fun.

Also spoiler warning for the game, hence why you should just go play it, done that? Good, now time for story.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 26 )

YES! Finally a crossover with Subnautica! I would have chosen Fluttershy to be the one who got transported there, but that's just what I think.

8770062
Stare on a Reaper. Flutters would be on the knife-edge of OP if it was her.

Two, whatever it was it wasn't aquatic or amphibious, it had fur and way too much of it to be useful underwater, making this the first non aquatic or amphibious creature he'd seen on this planet except for himself.

What about the Skyray? It’s flies in the air like a bird. And you literally just mentioned the Cave crawlers. Those are amphibious.

a survivor from the spaceship Aurora,

My thought process in Ponies when I read this line:
:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:

This has been, Thought Process with Ponies, goodnight.

Rainbowdash's head hurt.

That is not how you spell “Rainbow Dash”

8770861
You raise a valid point, not sure why I thought it was one word.

This is an Aliens crossover, right?

8773189
No, it’s a crossover of a game called Subnautica

8770062
Now we just need one of Factorio. :D

Oh yes! Been waiting for a good crossover!

What about the Emperor then? How does it speak to the character when not even the alien race could understand it?

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Yeah. That would be epic and SOOOOO hilarious.

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The Sea Emperor uses some kind of psychic powers to talk, talking through thoughts is different, your own mind would just translate those thoughts into words you understand.

Given you the player doesn't understand what the precursors say, I think that proves the sea emperor is the exception.

As for the precursors, remember the sea emperor says they could not hear her, not that they couldn't understand her.

Rainbow haired Pegasus
rainbow is a color, not a name, don't need to be capitalized

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Oh but also I’d like to give a few potentially helpful grammar corrections that could help improve reading through this story.

For example, this sentence from the start of the chapter:

The fact that the aliens actions sons where so, human, just made this even more confusing.
Instead of where, which is describing a place, you don’t actually need the h. The word you’re trying to put there is ‘were’. Not to be confused with we’re (which is ‘we are.’)
Oh also the word ‘sons’ doesn't really belong there at all.

But of course, brilliant crossover so far! I’m completely in love with the game Subnautica, And was thrilled to find a crossover for it with MLP! I look forward to reading more, and hope to not only do so, but to potentially help you with any grammatical errors, to help you become a better writer! (Not saying you aren’t already a good writer, just giving advice so readers don’t have to take a moment/nanosecond to understand what you really meant.)

Finally someone thought it was a good idea to make this crossover!


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Oh Jesus please dont let this be dead

8770091
Reapers have barely any brain, so the chance of the stare working is low

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I don't get what you're saying, I was just saying to someone that the Reaper Leviathan has a very, and I mean very, small brain so it probably has little to no feelings so the stare probably won't be able to make it feel bad, and you reply to my comment by saying that I only have this story and to come on?

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Then why where you replying to my comment?

8892005
It was quicker than to Scroll Down to the normal text box
Im lazy

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