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Mitch H

“What all the wise men promised has not happened, and what all the damned fools said would happen has come to pass.” ― William Lamb Melbourne


There is a ghost haunting the corridors of Ponyville's newest dwelling, the princess's Castle of Friendship. It is a ghost without voice, or hoof, or spectral limb to cast strange shadows upon crystalline walls.

But it's not the ghost of a pony. It's not a person at all.

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Georg #1 · 1 week ago · · ·

Excellent work. Love the concept.

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Ooh boy, you actually wrote it!

It seems odd that Twilight discourages that kind of visitor. Seems like that's a long-term friendship lesson in the waiting.

That's a really moving concept, starting out creepy and getting sweet at the end.

Thank you. This was from some transient prompt someone tossed out in the #writing-help channel of FiMFiction Discord server. Let's see...

Broken Rose - Dec. 1st at 11:04 PM H---, I'd read a story which had literally nobody as the character.

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