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Highlord Langslock
If the darkness grows so deep that we cannot see the light, then we shall rise up and BECOME the light!
Highlord Langslock
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...Dat Ending.
Wow, nicely done. Good backstory for Luna and letting her have some action with her new boyfriend. Looks like Flash is going to get a surprise himself. I wouldn't mind a sequel myself.
Ok, now you've just opened the door to a sequel.
Sequel.
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Three for three.
Please do a sequel. I want to see Flash's reaction when both Sunset and Twilight show up at his house. It'll be amazing.
ha ha ha... I get those reference. Do enjoy those.
This things reads like a cheap but well done
porn movieerotica. Neat.8145203 Four for four. Writing a sequel is looking really tempting right now.
Waaaaiiiit a second... That cover art looks suspiciously like my old closet!
Dat ending. XD
Also, this could do with another editing pass.
I snorted. Unfortunately. I really should stop drinking soda when reading.
I'd read more.
I'm not entirely sure why I read this, but I don't regret it. That said:
But, isn't that how horses usually...?
This sentiment coming from an ex-pony just feels really weird, is all.
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Ha. Though the only bit I would quibble with would be Celestia's choice of weapon. More of the fan of the controlled nova/gamma-ray burst.
Not only devastating, but a good "F**K YOU" to ring throughout the rest of Civilization. But can't really go wrong with a localized singularity/mini black hole either.
This was pretty good, and like others have said, you've set yourself up for a sequel quite nicely.
Here's to hoping for more!
"Hey Flash, mind if I crash at your place tonight?"
"I-guess not. Why?"
"I don't know...I just sense I should be there."
Judging by that ending, Flash is going to get Twilight or a threesome. Either way he is gonna get laid tonight!
You did well. Unlike most clopfics this has a more realistic feel, aside from the facts that they are fictional characters and the plot is your average vouyer erotica. I would like to see a sequel if it wouldn't be too much to ask. I give this story 4 out of 5 stars.
You sure about that?
and *began
That's not a very large area. And we have lots of nukes.
And That's Terrible.
Twi, you're never going to be an RPG protagonist at this rate. Read it!
get *out
*lose
Capital Watch
Mood whiplash, that's where you were.
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I know of the first reference, but what of the second?
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For your first attempt, well done.
8146550 Singularity Spell is from DnD, WoW and Stone Soup. Something Black Mage would do. Or was that Red Mage?
Booty call threesome, sweet
8147807 Actually, I just pulled the term out of my butt. I honestly had no idea that it had been used before, although it doesn't surprise me.
8145997 Equestrian ponies are extremely flexible, you know. They do a lot of things that they wouldn't be able to do if their bodies worked like those of regular ponies. Suffice to say, they not limited to any one position while boinking each other.
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I did some research, and the range is quite a bit larger than some of our nukes. Also, the Mage Corpse have the resources to case a lot of singularity spells, plus a number of other spells of mass destruction (handling them is actually their primary responsibility).
Yeah, remind me again how, aside from little girl show logic, that the CIA hasn't come down in droves and carted Sunset and co off to be examined/dissected? In this day and age where everybody records the most insignificant of events along with the monumental, I seriously doubt that word of them wouldn't have somehow gotten to them.
Huh... that doesn't really sounds like Lauren Faust from what I've read about her...
8149610 Oh, it's impressive for a single strike. But we have enough nukes to hit every square foot of land on this planet twice. (Granted, delivery to Equestria might be just a little problematic.
) Ponies seem to be far fewer in number, and most of them probably aren't capable of casting such spells (let alone repeatedly), so just commenting that the sheer destructive power is on the side of the
peoplemostly hairless apes. Ponies would have a big advantage if they control the dimensional tears, however, because then they could spell-cast anywhere.Stop, stop, stop.... are you telling me that this world's Luna's equivalent of her Nightmare Moon transformation was just a rebellious teenage goth phase?
....can't laugh.... mustn't.... fuck it.
8149864 It's not Lauren Faust, it's just the fanon Faust serving as my OC.
8149878 Hey, I am hardly the first to come up with this idea.
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Yeah, keep telling yourself that. It'll help you sleep better at night.
8149887 Eh, it's just what I've seen so far. It WAS mostly just a joke though.
8149890 Well, it's the first I've heard of it.
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Good read! I like how you avoided extremely detailed descriptions due to the fact that this is all observed by a 3rd party.
That ending though
Small typos:
let's
for a while
(awhile=for a while, so "for awhile"= for for a while)
Personal preference; use standard "anyway" instead of "anyways" in writing.
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8/8 Ending.
Quite honestly I skipped over the explicit stuff, for the most part. I read to see the pony duo break into a house (and was not disappointed). I was also highly entertained by Sunset and Twilight’s back and forth and Luna’s feel trip!
Also, if there’s a sequel, does that mean Sunset gets her drunken wish?
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Technically, no, because this story takes place in a different continuity from my "Harmony and Valor" series.
Sequel? Yes please.
Enjoyed the read
It's nice seeing Sunset and Twilight together again.
Funnily enough; this is the second time I've read a fic about Sunset watching Luna have sex in a closet.
Have a like.
I would like the sequel with Flash please.
I had a lot of fun reading this. Very well done both in terms of character *and* erotica!
And that ending.