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Mare Tree Money
Two hearts becoming one, a bond that cannot be undone.
Mare Tree Money
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This was an absolute delight to read. There's a realness to your writing, a raw authenticity that really shines through the beautifully crafted sentences that manage to convey an experience that I think many of us wish to have one day. I look forward to reading anything you might write in the future.
That'd be yes.
Smart.
Satisfying, innit?
Because it's hot?
Might be smart.
You spell 'arse' correctly, that's definitely worth a like!
yes I know how silly that sounds
the cover art’s cute
You portray raw sex in a very poetic manner that I honestly envy a bit. You should seriously consider writing some real romance novels.
Bravo, bravo!
I am in full agreement with Shining. I would be *very* into my SO getting physical with a strike pad or heavy bag.... I am also a very odd person.
I absolutely love the way you use words, the way you focus on the *people* rather than the act. It's really an amazing way to read smut, knowing the feelings and thoughts over just the raw actions. The way you put us into Cadence's head as she *feels* Shining in every conceivable way. Damn, you are an amazing writer. The ending also had me laughing my ass off. Cadence going to punch the Minister for some proper Shining time.
And it just occurred to me. I distinctly saw an appropriately used 'fuck' in there, but somehow there was Arse instead of ass.
I would also like you to know, you are among the *only* clopfics I have ever admitted to reading via comment.
Holy hell, that was hot.♨ (is holy hell a hot place?)
insert constructive and smart, and long comment about how great your writing skills are
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That final punch line...
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can’t tell if I love you or hate you
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Did I just say something foalish? If I did, I'm just going to claim I was making a joke and that you should have somehow known that.
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Nah it was nothing
Lovely. It moved seamlessly from Shining comforting Cadence to the sex.
I like this wasn't just smut, but a great story about a married couple that can talk to and support each other. And THEN the hot sex.
This was both hot and sweet.
This was seriously awesome to read. I love pretty much all of it. Sparring is both a great way to blow off steam and a great foreplay if you're with the right person. Shining is just awesome in this story. I love hoe it displays a loving, sexual relationship that also has some real friendship and respect in it as well.