• Member Since 7th Jan, 2018
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Mare Tree Money


Two hearts becoming one, a bond that cannot be undone.

Comments ( 14 )

This was an absolute delight to read. There's a realness to your writing, a raw authenticity that really shines through the beautifully crafted sentences that manage to convey an experience that I think many of us wish to have one day. I look forward to reading anything you might write in the future.

Cadance stopped pacing her husband's office to look at him, her mouth still half-open from the rant she had been in the middle of. She replied with an unintelligible sound as her mouth clipped shut.

That'd be yes.

in case of a wardrobe malfunction at an inopportune time, she was not going to be caught flashing her panties.

Smart.

A grin spread across her lips. She pulled her arm back, then threw her whole body into it, keeping each instruction in mind this time.

Satisfying, innit?

"You're into this?" she asked—more like gasped, really—and ran the back of her hand over her forehead. "Why?"

Because it's hot?

Then he dropped down onto the bench and yawned. “At least put on some clothes first.”

Might be smart.

You spell 'arse' correctly, that's definitely worth a like! :twilightsmile: yes I know how silly that sounds

the cover art’s cute

You portray raw sex in a very poetic manner that I honestly envy a bit. You should seriously consider writing some real romance novels.

Bravo, bravo!

I am in full agreement with Shining. I would be *very* into my SO getting physical with a strike pad or heavy bag.... I am also a very odd person.

I absolutely love the way you use words, the way you focus on the *people* rather than the act. It's really an amazing way to read smut, knowing the feelings and thoughts over just the raw actions. The way you put us into Cadence's head as she *feels* Shining in every conceivable way. Damn, you are an amazing writer. The ending also had me laughing my ass off. Cadence going to punch the Minister for some proper Shining time. :rainbowlaugh:

And it just occurred to me. I distinctly saw an appropriately used 'fuck' in there, but somehow there was Arse instead of ass.

I would also like you to know, you are among the *only* clopfics I have ever admitted to reading via comment. :rainbowwild:

Holy hell, that was hot.(is holy hell a hot place?)

insert constructive and smart, and long comment about how great your writing skills are

That final punch line... :rainbowlaugh:

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that final punch line

final punch line

punch line

punch

can’t tell if I love you or hate you

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Did I just say something foalish? If I did, I'm just going to claim I was making a joke and that you should have somehow known that.

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Nah it was nothing

Lovely. It moved seamlessly from Shining comforting Cadence to the sex.

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