The Secretary

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Mirror Star

Mirror Star #1 · Jan 13th, 2018 · · ·

This was good.

ShadowLDrago

ShadowLDrago #2 · Jan 13th, 2018 · · ·

She clicked her tongue against the roof of her mouth in admonishment and set the planner down on his desk. "I find it rather offensive to be referred to as a 'what'."
"What?" His brow shot up again. "Oh." There was a pause, then he repeated in a husky voice that tingled her nerves, "Oh."

This amuses me.

"Yeah, really!" His expression took on a youthful glow as he beamed at her, but there was a hint of mischief in his tone as he continued, "I could be the nerdy game store owner, and you could be my hot secretary that draws in all the other nerds but only has eyes for my +5 Broadsword of Greater Thrusting."

Really dude? Come on. You can do better than that.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #3 · Jan 15th, 2018 · · ·

Cadence sure has a lotta free time.

Shrinky Frod

Shrinky Frod #4 · Jan 15th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Cadance stood there, staring after him, wondering if it would be an abuse of her power to declare the day some sort of holiday so she could drag him back to the desk.

Yes, but not one that would really be problematic.

Just start a new tradition! Sexesta! It's when you take a nap after lunch by boning!

Mare Tree Money

Mare Tree Money #5 · Jan 15th, 2018 · 2 · ·

8670076 good question. does she? or was that just a part of her roleplay?

Honeydrops

Honeydrops #6 · Jan 15th, 2018 · · ·

Fun, simple and sexy!

River Dashe

River Dashe #7 · Jun 3rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

nicely written,
concise, subtle and easy to read.

NobodieZ

NobodieZ #8 · Dec 17th, 2018 · · ·

That was amazing!

Melesse Lindenya

Melesse Lindenya #9 · Dec 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

This is really well-written, with a great focus on the emotional aspects in addition to the physical. It's really erotic, and hits you in the loins and the heart, and it's such a raw display of realistic passion that I can't read it without imagining an actual married couple doing this, because holy hell there's this authenticity about it that just shines through.

It is honestly a case study in writing good porn, and I would recommend it (and the other stories by you) to everyone trying to learn the craft.

Also, forgive me if I'm oversharing, but the clopfic I'm currently working on is actually inspired by the way this story is written, because I wanted to try mimicking certain aspects of the style that I found made the story vastly superior to most smut on the site.

Fiend from the Darkness

Fiend from the Darkness #10 · Dec 29th, 2018 · 3 · ·

+5 Broadsword of greater thrusting?! Really?! God dammit, if I had been drinking anything, I'd be wearing it.

Okay, that was amazing. Once again, such focus on the *emotional* side of things makes you *feel* what the characters are feeling. Truly, you are an amazing writer of romance (because yes, this feels far more like romance than just simple smut). Also... that role-playing. Kinky kinky...