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Enclave2277


"Did you try setting it to Wumbo?"

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Is Coach Torch the EqG version of Dragon Lord Torch? I'm kind of surprised he doesn't have his own character tag.

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Yes. I looked for the tag but it does not exist.

Sweet and sensual.

I definitely enjoyed the story for the most part, I thought Celestia's awkward demeanour was something not many authors seem to incorporate in her overall personality.. I found it very cute ngl. It's certainly different from my own Principal Celestia headcanon(I imagine her as a little more laid back when talking to those close to her.. holding an aura of 'laid back elegance' rather than a stiff-blushy style entirely, but her being an utter mess in the romance department is something I agree with- I would've taken a slightly different approach, but it's honestly all up to headcanon) it was fairly enjoyable nonetheless.

I would say, the use of 'blushed' and just turning red in general became a bit redundant at points but I wouldn't say it made the stories progression all too weird. Celly being a roleplaying dork and Torch a motorcycle freak is a very cute combo, n I very much like that. He will always protecc his gf.

If you ever made a sequel of fluff just between these two- I'd read in a heartbeat lolol.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for a sequel, I would only write that if paid. This was a commission, after all.

This was fun. :twilightsmile: I'm a huge sucker for adorkable Principal Celestia.:heart:

Very well done

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