Hearts In the Snow

Jasmine Tea

Jasmine Tea #1 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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I think this is your finest work yet, Steel.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #2 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

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5452766 Oh, shush, no it isn't! What makes you say that?

Jasmine Tea

Jasmine Tea #3 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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5452794 well it helps that it's a sequel to a already good fanfiction. It ended pretty satisfying, this is just adding more fuel into the flames. You wright with such passion in your work, that I can't help but blush.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #4 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

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5452878 I simply try to write the best romance I can, hehe. Conveying passion through words isn't too difficult with the right pieces before you.

Jasmine Tea

Jasmine Tea #5 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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5452926 you'd be surprised how hard it is to do that. Especially when you're trying to get your work notice.

Laughter Falls

Laughter Falls #6 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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A sweet and satisfying sequel. Looking forward to more works from you.

Joey JoJo

Joey JoJo #7 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Welp. It's official I'm in love with this story along with its prequel.
Have a favorite and a follow!

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #8 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

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5454032 Thank you so much! May I ask what stood out for you in this story to earn such good favor?

Joey JoJo

Joey JoJo #9 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

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5454051
Well, I read your story, A Sweet Craving some time back when it first came out. Needless to say, your character interactions were well written and just felt so genuine. The same certainly applies here with Joe and Pinkie's chemistry proving to be both comedic and sweet, that you might have just given me a cavity. Not to mention the sex scenes that were both hot as all hell and heartwarming.

Lighting Ace

Lighting Ace #10 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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Is there a possibility of another sequel in the future where Pinkie use, a special spell or ask Zecora for a potion that allows her to had breast milk, from now on?
I mean that could be perfect for like Joe birthday, a 'special' cake made with super duper special 'pink milk' and love

Happy Birthday Joe! had a drink

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #11 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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5454624 Hmm...I hadn't thought of that. But it is an idea!

Lighting Ace

Lighting Ace #12 · Jan 2nd, 2015 · · ·

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5454632
Thanks glad that you like it

pahnazd

pahnazd #13 · Jan 6th, 2015 · · ·

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Loved the original, loved this one too
While some people may find long stories daunting (mindless clop has no place here! ), I myself like it more to see the story completely progress towards the end.
And this never failed to deliver - the way you write the characters themselves, the interactions, the emotion, all the build up towards the end.
Needless to say, the action is great too.
All in all, really amazing work!

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #14 · Jan 6th, 2015 · · ·

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5472255 Thank you so very much! I hope I can continue to earn such praise, hehe

Alexthekiller2025

Alexthekiller2025 #15 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · ·

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Dude you are a master. You have every skill needed to create a novel. Not a book but a novel. You my good sir, are what we should look up to and become.

Steel Quill

Steel Quill #16 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · ·

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5554417 Aww, thank you! You are kind to give me such praises May I ask what stood out for you in the story most?

Boott

Boott #17 · Feb 14th, 2015 · · ·

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What is love?
Is it the pursuit of some hot little thing that sets your world on fire with feeling and excitement?

Or is it something more?
Something deeper?
Is it the feeling of waking up in the morning and looking over to see the first thing of beauty today?
Is it the feeling of being happy just by seeing them happy?
Or is it the feeling of always being there even when times are bad, when they cry you cry, then they hurt you hurt.
To be ready to give up everything at a moments notice?

It is only up to you to decide.

“Yeah, that sounds…Hearts and Hooves day parade?”
Hmm....

DUBMAR3000