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CDL driver and mechanic by day and writer by night. Help me become a better writer and spread the magic of friendship


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I am liking this story so far. :pinkiehappy:

a tiny bit of magic like a spark to a flame

Thanks for the compliment. There is more, now that I'm back on track after losing the whole thing to file corruption. Taking it in a different direction and pleased where it's going so far. It will deal with some hard hitting subjects.

I do so love this story. Please write more at your discretion.

A good and believable story I hope the author continues to give this story the care it need no matter how long it takes to finish

Thank you so much for your comment. I plan to.

wow great chapters, can't wait for the next one.

...well i didn't expect that...Great chapter hope to see more soon

Ahhhhh! I'm screaming!
Fred, Philomena is a match made in heaven.

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As my eyes spotted the pegasus, and what my fire did to him, I couldn’t help but wince a little. His left eye was useless and black as was the fur around his eye.

You must regain your honor Pegasus Zuko.

Nice picture even though I have no clue who he is. Looks cool though

Watch Avatar the last airbender. Its a very silly cartoon, that is too serious for its own good.

Hes the first main villain in the show.

Oh yeah, now I remember. Slept since then. From the fire nation. I saw it years ago when it first came out. Rather liked it actually.

I find this is the read very interesting I look forward to Future chapters and maybe he can work on his magical powers.

well then that escalated quickly. great chapter hope to see more soon

It did yes, and even as I was writing this chapter I was wondering if it was too much.

Does this mean there's a possibility that Fluttershy might be added to fred and philomenas relationship, or just friends with benefits?

I'm afraid you'll just have to wait and see my friend.

I don't know why Fred bends over backwards for these people (ponies). I mean all he's ask is for them not to be pieces of shit when it comes to humans and half of them are like "nope I refuse to not be a pos". I would tell them to get fucked and go about my business.

Its so cook that I got goosebumps when he was talking about the history or Lady Liberty.

I wonder what's instore for him and the group next.

I love t he emotional build up. This is getting cute and hot back to back and I'm loving all of it. Thank you mate.

I love to see just how much they've been warming up to Fred, Twilight and Rainbow especially in this chapter.
Thank you so much for another great chapter!

Thank you, both. Hope you all had a happy Thanksgiving.:twilightsmile:

I really love the passing in your strois by the way, Hope to see more Twilight and Fred moments like that because I have to admit, it was amazing well done.
Happy Holidays

Thank you. It pleases me to hear about a reader enjoying what I write. Hope you had a good Christmas and a happy New Year.

How many chapters long will this story be?

Very good question. Not all that sure myself actually. But I'd estimate somewhere between 30-32. The main story will end similar to season 4, then I plan on writing a small-ish extra short story where he returns to the human world during the Equestria Girls Rainbow Rocks timeline.

Do you plan to make sequel to the story after the short?

Rarity is a true bitch and so is Fred for forgiving her. Her actions nearly got him killed, that shit ain't something you just forgive and forget. I like this story but hes a damn door mat. Guy needs some damn backbone.

Great story there were some errors but all in all great story:twilightsmile:

Thanks for your complements. If you want to point out some errors, I'd be happy to fix them.

I hope no one missed how ironic it was that right after Fred was saying how glad he is that humans don't have magic (like your typical HiE misanthrope) the princess of friendship came in and showed him how responsible the ponies are with their magic.

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