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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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Dude that shower scene was hot! Hope to read more from you soon.

7991024 Thanks, I did my best. I'm not very good with writing a clop series so I gave it a try.

7991043 Well if this is your first try, you should definitely continue

Since you guys like it. I'll definetly keep going

KO awesome chapter, Seth got two girls down after Adagio and had solved a murder mystery from just day one as he is gonna start his own detective agency! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

7993144 Yup, although I don't think the frying pan to the face felt good to him. But you're right, he did get 2 girls

KO awesome chapter, Rarity is down of the pleasures and the leaves few more girls to go as Seth continues to unlock his memories and to become a detective. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

KO awesome chapter, another girl has been dominated by Seth and his business of a detective has begun for new case he'll take and mystery to solve. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

*saw title, got excited
*read description, not Case Closed crossover

:pinkiesad2:

7996320 So you actually know the anime, huh? Sorry if it's not a crossover. If it was, I would've added that genre. But there are some similarities from the anime

KO awesome chapter, Seth is definitely the smartest and level headed detective when he solve the case and got Applejack as well. That dude is going places. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

8003423 And he's very creative in bed

KO awesome chapter, Seth solved another case and man Snip needs to get a life. Seth also dominated both Sonata and Pinkie Pie, two more girls until he has the whole gang together. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

8010717 Thank you. It wasn't easy. But I managed

this is was the best erotic chapter I've ever read, it gave a boner, that's for sure

KO awesome chapter, he finally got all 10 girls as his new life truly has a bright future ahead and new adventures await for them on mysteries and excitement! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

8011871 Then you'll be happy to know that I'm currently working on the sequel right now.

You know, when I first saw this story I thought it'd be longer.

8012095 I'll try to make it longer in the sequel.

Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8037064 There's a chapter involving a dead body covered in blood from multiple stab wounds

8039145 If you want to know, the chapter is all yours to read. You'll feel the hate coming from his murderer

In which one of your stories did the Dazzlings become good?

8048831 I'll try to make a backstory in the sequel telling how the Dazzlings changed their ways.

DANG! This story is pretty good! Is he going to get with all the others?

I'm guessing Seth becomes the alpha male whenever the girls tell him to be rough with them. Good call. I wonder what he's like when he lets his girls be the dominate ones.

"handsome prince?" HAH! Now that's a classic. But then again, that IS what Rarity would say. Also, I like how he's not just rough in bed, but also has a gentle side to himself. He sure knows how to treat a classy lady.

Does this story have any M/F sex scenes where the woman does most or all of the work?

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I think the sequel does, but if you haven't read it, I think Rarity takes control

I keep coming back to this story; no bad pun intended! :rainbowlaugh:
But, seriously! AWESOME STORY!!

8638298
thank you. I'm glad you enjoy it.

8645922
yeah, I added that for a laugh

I FINALLY got through this story, now I've got two more to go

Oh hell that, I will not be nice with this comment. He allowed himself to get hit upside the head hard with a frying pan? Then have the decency to say why am I naked and looking at the very person who assaulted him. Finds out that he is a detective and let's not question it, any officer of the law knows how to defend themselves there's no excuse don't care what any of you think. So where is The Comedy of a guy constantly getting beat up by a girl and don't defend himself back, I do not get it why so pacifist and passive about not defending yourself from a female? Cuz now these days it is just pointless for not holding back, it's really pointless, I would have told her go f*** yourself after hitting me with a frying pan right now I just don't like you! Now phonies how you like them apples? Down rate if this makes you uncomfortable, smiles.

And another thing, any violent act that a female does from now on when the guys is being respectful or is put in a situation by accident, is a a f****** feminist.

The Octa and V shipping i hate with a passion.

9505572
why, it's one of the shippings that makes sense

That was a good start of the story, plus I can tell these girls are being flirty and want to have him in the pinthouse.

Seth, you rock star

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Believe it or not, this was my very first clopfic

No, not timber, he was like a cool guy to chill with when i watch that movie man

any way, that was an awesome chapter, including that rainbow dash added her iconic 20% cooler.

Im getting into this story already, I going to binge read all three case closed stories for this week.

9527500
Yeah, I will admit, he didn't deserve to be killed, but at the same time, I'd prefer Twilight being available for someone else, whether it's someone like Seth or possibly mine or someone else's OC. She's too beautiful to be with Timber

I just hope others will understand that

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