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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

Comments ( 123 )

I like this. But I'm tempted to thumbs down just because the chapter title reminds me of The Happening.

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Couldn't sit through all of it. Not even halfway. I would have just killed myself. Though I do love to see reviews of people ripping it apart.

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yeah... that movie never sat well with me. Not only was the movie itself poorly written, but I also despise even the thought of suicide

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Quick question. Are his parents dead? Because that's what it says in the first paragraph.

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What movie? Are we talking about the first eqastira girls movie?

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No. They are talking about the M Night Shyamalan movie "The Happening".

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Pretty bland. Nostalgia Critic covered it on one of his videos.

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So what does the happening have to do with this story XP

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Crap! No, I'm gonna change that part. His parents are actually gonna be alive, but they're abroad

DAMN, now this is going to be a great fanfic to read as you bring out new chapters for it, any chance that you can get the Principal and Vice-Principal from Canterlot High to join in or maybe the one's from Crystal Prep too?

Is some of the male characters will be changed genders? Just asking

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Since they fall into the category of MILF, they'll definitely get banged

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I might have a few, but I want you guys to decide who it should be.

1. Celestia and Luna
2. The Dazzlings
3. Vignette Valencia

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Dazzlings. When I have a choice, I'm always picking Dazzlings

Hmmm ... actually liked that they changed back in the end and maintained their personalities.... they just got hornier.

I'm guessing his eventual conquests will be the rest of the main 6...er 5 to go, the dazzling, the shadow bolts, wallflower and juniper ... student wise. Cougar/milf wise main 6 mothers, cadance, zecora, luna and celestia, chrysalis,gloriosa(you can have timber catch them at the end muhahaha. Try breaking into my house I bone your sister...bam.) Let me say this for those who are gonna go oooh their cheating on their husbands. It isn't cheating if he's asked to donate for a couple wanting a child due to medical reasons, payback for cheating first, or someone whose in a open relationship/marriage.

great chapter, everyone is going to enjoy this

Just wondering. Did you know this is Featured?

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It's also not cheating if the husband is barely on his last legs after banging his wife so many times that he wants a break, but his wife won't stop until he's dead, so who are they gonna call? :D

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Not only that but they could also have a fetish about watching their wife with another guy. Or threesomes... they do happen both ways.. maybe it's her turn that week.

Hmmm... know what would be interesting... a bachelor auction. The girls can (edit:or maybe even rarity since it sounds kinda like what rich people do for kicks) ... bribe him... to be their entry for charity. Also you could stick it to timber or flash and have someone old like granny Smith buy him for .50 cents like the movie groundhogs day.

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also, I think I'll take the idea of Timber walking in on his sister getting fucked into consideration.

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yeah, I made it clear since I added them during the editing process with the story title

Could I make a request for Trixie and Starlight?

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Thank you very much and I really do appreciate all of the hard work you and your friend put into these stories. Keep up the good work and keep bronying on.

At first i wasnt sure if i should read this, some of the kinks that were listed are my mortal enemies, but than i thought "well it is a Yabuki story so i know that its gonna be good" and oh boy am i glad i did cuz this stuff is amazing!
If future chapters are gonna be similar to this than im sold.

I wonder how Sunset is gonna react when she sees the Dazzlings

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Oh-ho, that's a scene I'm gonna enjoy writing

I wonder who is next for the ride of the lifetime?

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Here's a few good hints: this young lady is engaged, her fiance has a little sister who loves books and finally, she works for a principal who blackmailed her fiance's little sister.

You pulled away, choking.

"Twilight, you're... lactating?!" you asked with wide eyes.

Your adorkable lavender cutie simply giggled at your reaction. "Is it a bad thing?" she asked.

Why is this in second person, while the rest of the chapter is in first person?

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