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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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Don't sweet it, it was cute and nice, so both princess have their respective double gangers eh? Makes me wonder what would happen if Molestia and Moon start to fight their real self for more time with their husbands

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lol, I think they'd wear out their husbands beyond the point of exhaustion

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Or because they are link they will awake a darker side of their husband for them to match…a real "Emperor of the day" and "Sultain of Terror" if you wish. The power couple that not only share immortality but also evil doubles.

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Just food for though, I can't wait who will be the next pony, or if you will consider micro stories of the adventures of all this men married to the main 6 and the princesses…or if there will be someone for Queen Chrysalis

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Oh there'll be someone for the old changeling queen. Same with a few other characters

"As you wish.

My mind immediately jumped to Wesly saying that in The Princess Bride.

Blank Check? How the he'll is that even close to a classic ?

It was decent but it felt too similar to the Celestia story, a bit more variaty would've been nice but i still liked it.

"Lulu? Oh no, I am not Lulu for the time being. I am... NIGHTMARE MOON!!!" she shouted. She let out an evil laugh, flaring her sharp, predatorial teeth. You felt a bit scared, but the more you stared at her, the you started to think how sexy she looks in this form.

BLU heavy: oh nooooo!!!
BLU demoman: oh cripe!!!
BLU solder: oh c**p!!!
BLU pyro: (muffled scream)

Minor typo

when you lifted yourself up to see her, she instantly disappeared instantly through a flashing light

Too many instantly

The monk

I’m gonna flat out say it. Everyone’s parents are dead on the fimfiction site like damn what can a nibba do to get story where the protagonist in a “HIE” or anything with an “OC” tag has their parents still alive, and the parents deaths isn’t ever of “dead of old age” it’s always “My parent were killed by a dilapidated autistic kid”, but who am I to say this is a retarded and cliche way to get the main character edgy and cared about by the audience it kinda works I guess.

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Because every hero OC needs to have the same backstory as Batman.

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I'm making a few changes to some of the OCs' backstories in the later fics

“Marry me!” you said without thinking. Luna blinked in surprise at this sudden proposal before she began blushing and ruffling the feathers of her majestic wings.

Dude! think before you say anything!

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I'd say that was an appropriate response for a lot of us actually.

great story end it with la pace from kingdom heart rechain of memories:pinkiehappy:

You know, this is the first time I've read the term necrolapsy.

Same holycross I never knew it was a real thing

YIS! i was hoping for this to get redone and have the old chapter be kept

My dude I'm but I could say is when is the next chapter coming out I hope I'm not sounding mean or anything thanks for reading this comment

So when is part 2 coming out sorry if I sound mean or anything it's just it's good and I would like to see if we can cure him of his sleeping problem

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I'll get back on it as as soon as my laptop is fixed AND you be patient

Ik ur friend said something about ur Heath problem and if I knew u had Heath problem I would not have puter that comment and hopeing u feel better soon and don't sorry I'll wait patiently for you to get better

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Where'd you get the new Luna picture from?

"Thanks Luna. Will do." You walked into her room and took one of the books from her bookshelf and started reading it. As the time went by, Luna started yawning, hour after hour, wanting to go to sleep for the day and you were reading through every book in her shelf. Finally it was 7 AM and you were growing a bit tired. Luna definitely felt same way you did judging by her yawning.

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Statistically the likelihood of alien horse bipeds speaking in an earth language or having the same written language, is so statistically low and unrealistic that you may as well not even talk about it. And that doesn't even get into the biological dangers to both native and the 'invader' of deadly hazards of biological or viral induced sicknesses and diseases due to an immune system with no defenses against the new biological or viral dangers.

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dude, thinking about that makes my brain hurt. My editor and I try.

How you been Izzy XD hey love the story's you and tailbeast Been doing awesome on the story keep up the great work the both of u 😊👍👍👍

How's the story going I'm hopeing it will be 20% cooler then the first Luna story also happy Halloween 🎃🎃🎃

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I didn't get much work done on it today since my editor's been mourning the death of one of his family members and he hasn't gotten back to me since earlier today when he said he has a plan

Oh .... I'm sorry for his lose

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