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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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thats agood start looks like chrysalis need to learn love

Liked the Beauty and the Beast reference in there. Hope the next chapter doesn't take as long as last time

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I found it on google images. It was the only one I could find that fit the story

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lol, I'll try to publish the next chapter as soon as possible. And good eye on the reference.

Awwwww :rainbowkiss:, that was sweet. Thanks for the heart warming read, I liked it alot.

Who's next the background ponies or the cmc

To quote Einstein, "Evil does not exist, or at least it does not exist unto itself. Evil is simply the absence of God. It is just like darkness and cold, a word that man has created to describe the absence of heat. God did not create evil. Evil is the result of what happens when man does not have God's love present in his heart. It's like the cold that comes when there is no heat or the darkness that comes when there is no light." Chrysalis was just lost, not evil. If she were truly evil, she wouldn't have a sense of mercy.

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You my friend, just earned a slow applause of approval. Well said.

Hello, you don't mind if I do a reading on this story? I personally fell in love with this story because it's really good. :D

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if you mean by a clopfic reading on YouTube, then yes, you have my full permission.

8324947 I'm doing the entire thing, every chapter I'm just waiting on my good friend to send me her lines for chrysalis for chapter two and chapter three.

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Oh, so she's already finished her lines on the 1st chapter? That's pretty good.

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Yea she did, but how busy she is it's possibly going to take it least another week just to receive the lines for chapter 2 then a week later and receive the final lines for chapter 3. But I'm going to let you in on a little secret here I am putting 100% effort into reading, editing, and music, for this story to make very special. You can see why I wanted to have a female to voice Chrysalis instead of doing it myself?

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Yeah, I can tell how much of a struggle it is to do something on your own.

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I'd say that was a pretty good clopfic reading.

It would be awesome if you could make a small sequel where King Fang and Queen Chrysalis make peace with Equestria.

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So it's a euestria heaven when we die because every single time when a human dies in your stories they go to a Equestria

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This is actually one of my favorite stories in the series because you make the changeling queen into a good guy

"I'm glad you like it. I wasn't sure what love tasted like. But when I came across those cocoa beans, I figured love might actually be a sweet taste, so I got the beans."

That explains a few things.....

Chrissy is my favorite mlp villain. I like how you made her good in this story

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Everyone has a good side, it just requires the right thing, or person, in this case to help show it

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You can thank DisneyFanatic's Daughter of Discord story/audio drama for that. As in her story, Mothball explained that chocolate tastes like love

I like the reference of the Beauty and the Beast, a human male who live out in the cabin in the woods and a anthro changeling queen exile in the everfree forest, a good set of a plot of the story.

This chapter is sweet, knowing their down turn and began to care for each other makes this chapter feel heart warming.

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That is so true, plus Chrysalis is not the only one

A great pleasurable ending for the queen, and fang got what he wanted a father of a colony of changeling/human hybreads. you could imagine how crazy it is to raise that many. would we hear about them in future story?

Since she's now giving love, wouldn't this cause her love metamorphosis?
Might lead to a sequel.

I think there is a audio reading of this, and that's where I first heard it.

I really love this story from the first to last chapter. Seeing chrysalis have her happy ending makes me smile, everybody deserves to be happy no matter who they are and she really needed that. Thank you.

"I... I never knew cocoa beans could taste so much like love, if not better." she said, surprised.

Well that makes sense because chocolate contains a chemical that triggers the release of endorphins which causes a feeling of love.

You know she’s villain through the end right?

Btw, since Chrysalis is no longer craving love, don’t you think it’s time for her to change like Thorax and the others did in S6 at the end?

me encantan estas historias, como latrama uuuffff... con o sin lemon me encantan

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I had to use Google Translate to find out what you said.
Still, I'm glad you like my stories.

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si yo tuve que traducir toda la historia, soy de Mexico y bueno... me encantan estas historias

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