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WildWPony


CDL driver and mechanic by day and writer by night. Help me become a better writer and spread the magic of friendship

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I am interested where this is going... and now I think that all most all of the mane six are jerks.

You spelled the name wrong. It’s true that it has nine tails, but the Pokemon is called Ninetales. Proof.

really if somebody would have done that to me I would have kicked him so hard they will be crying for the Dead

>>goldfencer
Huh, You know I didn't even catch that until I saw your post. Thanks for pointing that out I'll change it.

I will wait for a few more chapters before I start reading, but I WILL read it :D

I feel like there is to many “I” in a paragraph which throws me off but good story can’t wait for more!

>>Kodor
That's true and I'm trying to break myself of that bad habit. Practice makes perfect.

Twilight finaly steps up and behaves like a princes and a element, well after a minor missunderstanding thx to rainbows fear of foxes?.

This is delightfully well written and rather cute! The language barrier is making things pretty fun. Looking forward to more! Tracked and upvoted!

Interesting beginning. The MC turning into a predator species that no pony but Fluttershy can understand is an interesting twist. I look forward to future chapters.

I am delighted that I got to read this

This is enjoyable and seeing Twilight act the say she does is refreshing.

I got my like, favorite, and book mark in waiting on more updates :twilightsmile:

Yaks and a nine tail, what could possibly go wrong...?

Do I detect Luna and Celestia shipping?


9008654
This can only end in comedy.

I think this is a really good story

He landed in cadences bathtub That’s my guess

9050988
No, its gotta be celestia's or luna's. But hopefully Luna's

9051088
How much you want to bet it was Raritys:raritycry::pinkiehappy:

9051120
Sorry not a betting guy, so really it could be lyra's for all we know.(for which I hope not, but that could be funny)

9051088
No even better it’s bluebloods he falls in love with the human on his first look at him he just has to have this rare specimen and he completely Head over heals for him

Nice chapter, now lets see what traits that carry over from his different forms. A ninetails have a lot of different traits from a human. And plz be careful so the human form not become the dominant one that solves all problems to the character has been meet with, when one of the selling points of this story is the misunderstood fox.

>>Ales
Excellent points. No his human form won't be the dominant one that solves all the problems so don't worry. And the misunderstood fox theme will continue through the story and create some funny situations. I do keep his Ninetales abilities restricted to just his Ninetales form and his human form restricted to just the ability to return to fox form. However, he finds that his human form has perks as well.

And no I won't say where he got teleported to. Everypony will just have to wait. There will be twists, turns, and surprises through the story to keep things interesting with one big surprising twist at the very end.

Wait a minute am I smelling a harem fic?

9052352 you're replying the wrong way, they way you are attempting does not notify the person you are replying to.
it goes off the comment number, for example the comment of your's i'm replying to is comment no. 9052352. to get the number for the reply click the button on the far right side in the same row of the comment with the comment number on the story, the date it was posted, like/dislike, and the chapter it was posted on.

9063695
Thanks. Learn something new everyday right? I'm still new to this, so thank you. Not to broadcast my age or anything, but I grew up when the internet was still young and things were done a little differently back then. :-)

By the way on a side note I really liked Volteer's character in "The Legend of Spyro" PS2 series.

have fun with the child of destiny Blueblood

Love this story. Please continue.

*<>* when is he going to go get his car or did he just forget about it after feeling up the locals ?...

9118721
Just for your FYI. His car is still in the human world. He got transported while inside Walmart.

Ok I see a major herd thing going on and I see luna and celestia r apart of it. Fluttershy to. Or is it just me?

This is awesome so far can't wait to see where this goes.

This was a funny,sweet,cute and awesome read he can't even talk there language and is still get then to fall for him.

Man that was some good teasing to both them and the readers for a second there I thought I was going to get to read some action between him and Twilight good job keep it up and hopefully we will actually get to see some action

Pretty decent story, only real complaint is of how quickly his relationship is progressing with everyone.

This just keeps getting better and better each chapter,I can't wait to see more.

Humming with another bite I closed my eyes to savor the taste, “Well yes, but our food isn’t as pure as yours. The government in our world fears the people at large and so sneaks in chemicals in the food to make them docile. That way anything the government does against them they won’t be able to fight back.”

Wah? I've never heard of this.

well i came here for the plot(story) but i got some Plot(secret) but other than that little tidbit great story so far i hope to see more soon

I'm glad that their wrongdoing gets addressed and is not swept under the carpet. And Twi acting as an actual authority is rather refreshing.

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