Sweetie Belle's First Heat

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Semivivus

Semivivus #1 · Feb 18th, 2020 · 6 · ·

Sweet mother of Faust... that cover art is terrifying.

WildWPony

WildWPony #2 · Feb 18th, 2020 · · ·

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LoL Sorry, that's not what I was going for. I can't draw to save my life, and I couldn't find anything that I could use, so I used the 3Dpony creator.

PizzaPlanetDeliveryTruck

PizzaPlanetDeliveryTruck #3 · Feb 18th, 2020 · · ·

*<>* this ... Seems like it should be longer or have a follow-up chapter

Rainbow Kirby

Rainbow Kirby #4 · Feb 18th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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I'm going to he honest. It would be better if you got rid of the cover art.

Matrixster

Matrixster #5 · Feb 18th, 2020 · · ·

Honestly the story looks good, but that cover art is prob what’s causing a lot of dislikes and turnoffs

WildWPony

WildWPony #6 · Feb 18th, 2020 · · ·

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I suppose they never heard don't judge a book by its cover. Which as you have stated is exactly what they're doing. But apparently that is what they're doing. You're not the first to suggest it, so I've deleted the cover for now.

Comment posted by Moonlight_Mist deleted May 13th, 2020

WildWPony